a "spark" of interest.

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Nov 15, 2012 4:55 AM #787715
youtube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SGw9EK26MbI&feature=plcp
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Fileize http://www.fileize.com/view/dc6c77d7-c5e/






I'M SO FUNNY. CUZ LIKE. SPARK. AND ELECTRICITY. AND unrusting after a month...
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Nov 15, 2012 5:06 AM #787720
Nice ish man, I wanna see a full length from you tho. That would be even nicer ish.
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Nov 15, 2012 3:52 PM #787966
Nice effects and sounds, You should definitely make a longer animation.
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Nov 15, 2012 3:57 PM #787969
Epic.
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Nov 15, 2012 7:55 PM #788087
Any cc?
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Nov 16, 2012 3:41 PM #788749
Sometimes it looks and feels like the electricity is too scribble like. It could be a bit cleaner if you ask me.
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Nov 16, 2012 9:45 PM #789018
i like the effect

but this \/
Quote from Telepurte
Sometimes it looks and feels like the electricity is too scribble like. It could be a bit cleaner if you ask me.


look at how many lines you use to make up the electricity, and cut it in half. i can't tell if it's a LOT of lightning, or really bad water near the end.
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Nov 16, 2012 10:39 PM #789103
thanks for the cc, I'll keep that in mind next time, though I did personally like it this way
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Nov 17, 2012 2:02 PM #789745
Also, you make longer animations. Making just short and sweet animations is sort of holding yourself back with the talent you have. Why not make it around 30 seconds instead of just one or two? Sure it will take a while to make but it will be much more worth it. The shorts are nice but if you make them longer it will be nicer.

But this is an unrust so I don't really blame ya'.