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May 14, 2008 6:00 AM #135182
I'm starting my comic... got about 32 pages roughly drawn... and I just started inking a little.

Here is my one, inked, frame.

Also, I'm having a debate with myself because of the content of the series. For one it's very, very violent to boot, and the language is pretty strong.

Should I release an edited version to start and later come out with the unedited one? You'll see why soon >.>

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Bonus: not inked:
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May 14, 2008 9:11 AM #135209
FUCKING FINALLY.

How long has it been since you said you were going to start?...ffs.

I like how clean the inked version looks. Cant say much from the story for two pages. Keep going, yo.
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May 14, 2008 1:09 PM #135242
Looks epic inked.
I don't think you should edit them, makes it seem more mature and worth reading.

I look forward to it.
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May 14, 2008 3:04 PM #135263
Aye, glad for the support guys. Maybe I'll put some more stuff up or ink more this evening...
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May 14, 2008 3:36 PM #135273
really looks great. i'd say unedited makes it better. but its up to you. should be awesome when finished though :) and even better when one day you animate it! which you better do! :p
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May 14, 2008 3:56 PM #135276
Quote from fitzy
really looks great. i'd say unedited makes it better. but its up to you. should be awesome when finished though :) and even better when one day you animate it! which you better do! :p


I'm probably going to release two versions.. because.. well... you'll understand when you see it >.>

Within the pages so far someone gets ripped in half, a dude gets his arm ripped off and beaten with it, a guy gets his neck snapped and is choking to death when cyrus decides to blow him up... ect
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May 14, 2008 4:01 PM #135277
sounds schmexy :D

when will we be able to get a taste of the full thing?
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May 14, 2008 5:20 PM #135306
I like the art, but the story seems like a pretty generic fighting anime.

Anyway, I can't say much because I always get sucked into those sort of things.

BTW edited first imo.
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May 14, 2008 6:14 PM #135312
Quote from Bongoe
I like the art, but the story seems like a pretty generic fighting anime.

Anyway, I can't say much because I always get sucked into those sort of things.

BTW edited first imo.


uhhh.. I don't see how you can say that with only two pages >.>
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May 15, 2008 5:10 AM #135605
Double post for great JUSTICE!

Here is a little example of violence...
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May 15, 2008 5:36 AM #135609
Only the second image loaded at first, and I was a little worried about the quality of the art, but the inked frame looks great, I hope you can keep up that look throughout the whole comic.
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May 15, 2008 5:50 AM #135614
Sweet art! The dismembered arm is cool looking.
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May 19, 2008 9:59 PM #138263
very cool i want to create a comic i know how to draw manga but i just cant be assed
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Jun 7, 2008 5:23 PM #150814
are you gonna let out the whole comic?
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