I couldnt find a subject to post this thread in since theres no film related board here, so I figured Id just post it in this one since I always post here anyway.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?annotation_id=annotation_465293&feature=iv&src_vid=t0zZ2mI_TPQ&v=oOdfWPASuvw

Feedback is much appreciated, was my first try at a short film made for my highschool film course. Any improvements that can be made I would love to hear!