RHG Mr Bloo

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Nov 27, 2012 5:10 PM #799945
Mr Bloo

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Abilities: Conducting Electricity,Massive Speed,The Ability to jump higher than normal,Can make Weapons and lift Opponents and Objects with his electricity.

Weaknesses:Anything that can kill a normal human.

Story: He was a normal guy on his way to School until one day he messed with the wrong crew, so he ran away from them and got lost in the woods and he got hit by 200,000,000 volts of lightning. Hours later He awoke,turns out he survived but he could now conduct electricity,Make/control objects with his electricity,he also has remarkable speed and a healing factor.
After obtaining these powers, He made a sword from his electricity and some black metal. he met Red Blade,then Mr Bloo found out that Red Blade is in the RHG tournament so he said "What's RHG?". Red Blade told him about RHG and he said "Sure why not?",He now searches for a fight.
Demo:http://filz.us/93s (Note, This is my very first anim so it sucks)
Demo 2: Coming Soon.
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Battles:None at the moment.
Not Available for battle.
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Nov 27, 2012 5:11 PM #799946
Dudddeeee,it has some stuff by the rules,but it needs abilities and weeknesses :/
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Nov 27, 2012 5:14 PM #799947
good you've made it, you need to edit and state you weaknesses and abilities
good demo, but don't use the direct link, use the permanent link
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Nov 27, 2012 5:14 PM #799948
The story of your RHG is very long and original compared to the other ones.
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Nov 27, 2012 5:29 PM #799951
ok i fixed it i just forgot them but i fixed it
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Nov 27, 2012 5:35 PM #799955
the abilities and weakness comes before the story, try puting it like this:

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Mr Bloo

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Color:blue

abilities:lightning,speed and can jump high

weaknesses:ice and water

Story:he was in the forest and he got hit by 200000000 volts of lightning and he survived but he could now punch lightning
he could also jump high and has quickness

Demo:http://filz.us/93s

battles:
none yet

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Nov 27, 2012 6:10 PM #799970
ok i fixed it again
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Nov 28, 2012 7:00 PM #800967
hi man, not bad :D, don't worry you'll improve, we all do :D:D:D:D
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Dec 24, 2012 1:13 PM #827738
Quote from Mark XD
hi man, not bad :D, don't worry you'll improve, we all do :D:D:D:D


shut up, lol,
that the most simply and awesome rhg, i know
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Dec 26, 2012 2:16 AM #829390
You should update your Story btw nice about lightning,Speed and High jump power Anyways just other says improvements

I wish i could challenge you but i said improvement
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Dec 26, 2012 1:17 PM #829833
why do i think that lightning related abilities are popular? -_-
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Dec 26, 2012 1:40 PM #829858
Quote from RockHardJester
why do i think that lightning related abilities are popular? -_-


because its, shocking,.....get it :D
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Dec 26, 2012 1:42 PM #829861
lol now i get it XD... i should add a Mjollnir Ability on my RHG character -_-
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Dec 26, 2012 1:56 PM #829874
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lol now i get it XD... i should add a Mjollnir Ability on my RHG character -_-


lol, don't let me stop you, hurry up, lol
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Dec 26, 2012 2:16 PM #829889
finished lol XD why is my rhg the same as Benjamin (my RHG haz magical powers) and why do i have tons of abilities -_-