just made a test with a default and i think it turned out ok. the bit at the end where he goes to the left looks to jumpy though. what do you guys think? :



note: i was going for a cartoony style.

pretty good. I already told u on msn so...

Try not to do that swinging arm thing; it makes the animation look really stiff. And work on easing. A lot of movements started and stopped, without any speeding up or slowing down.

Yeah, the arms swing stopped to early, and it was jerky. Rusty already?

yea i also agree. just a bit to fast for the stoppin arm thing but i thought that punch was cool...YEA!!

Lone Wolf: that was what i was aiming for (being a bit stiff) as its the style i was aimin for with the default. and yeah the easing pretty much sucked in this.

and which arm swing do you mean? do you mean the punch one? because i quite liked that one. or did you mean the first one because i can see what you mean.

Whoa, it's that excuse again. "That's my style".
Stiff, doesn't come in styles.

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Lone Wolf: that was what i was aiming for (being a bit stiff) as its the style i was aimin for with the default. and yeah the easing pretty much sucked in this.

and which arm swing do you mean? do you mean the punch one? because i quite liked that one. or did you mean the first one because i can see what you mean.

All the arm swings. And stiffness is something that should not be in any quality animation, whether it be your strange style or not.

lol your trying for an intermediate style when your only begginer?
wow, ok you tried, but failed also.
you tried to ease it but it was still rather stiff.
also, choppy!
the landing lacked force or power,
and the punch had no follow-through, aka his body didnt move with the arm, therefore rendering the arm as harmless as being hit repeatedl over the head by a rather angry marshmalllow.
also wtf at the double framing! do you run like that? lmao, noooooez!
yeah, also the stick, when it fell, bounced all wrong, as did the first box,

otherwise, ok.
bout low/med begginer.
getting there.

lol it looked kinda weird... but i see where ur gettin at wiht the cartoony style only just though