Addio old and new, tips please

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Dec 6, 2012 4:43 PM #808928
well, this is what i've done to todays practice :D

please leave some tips so i can pick that up and throw it hard but nice into my animation.

here it is ;D

http://www.fileize.com/view/5f455d9c-bc6/

(another animation that are too old, but i wanted to post it anyway, lol
btw the guy im fighting isnt an animatior, its my brother, hehe, this is mouse drawn:

http://www.fileize.com/view/e12ddeb0-0a9/

I just have to upload more! This is an animation i was really proud of, and now i just feel
like im bader than before after wathching this, mostly because this is mouse drawn :/

http://www.fileize.com/view/ec7240d3-e7a/

I cant stop uploading :D this is a voiceacting test, he says "I am Ruben"
the sound was recorded by my brother:

http://www.fileize.com/view/43fad006-860/ )
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Dec 6, 2012 10:17 PM #809083
I don't really get what was happening in some scenes.
The angles are just too confusing.
For your movements, It's really wobbly and adding more frames can work too.
You need to ease everything.
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Dec 7, 2012 6:52 AM #809453
okay, thanks for the tip ;D
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Dec 7, 2012 11:01 AM #809555
In the second one I really felt like I was being beaten up...
The only tip I could really give is try to add more frames and maybe add lines for the hips and a line for the head in the background to stop resizing