Lighting combo

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Dec 9, 2012 5:19 PM #811989
http://www.fileize.com/view/80c8fcb1-716/ I'm going to see if I can practice elements now, any tips or CnC?

EDIT: Here's a test on fire I also made today! : http://www.fileize.com/view/7dce7009-66a/ (I know the smoke could use some work)
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Dec 9, 2012 9:57 PM #812183
Try an give the lightning more motion and jist, as in, make the stick seem as though he's putting all he's got in it. Maybe add more light and pizzow. Other than that, it's excellent :3
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Dec 9, 2012 11:16 PM #812266
Nice, I like em.
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Dec 9, 2012 11:17 PM #812268
What? lol
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Dec 9, 2012 11:19 PM #812271
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What? lol


oops lol typo i ment to say i like em
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Dec 9, 2012 11:22 PM #812276
Oh, well thanks lol
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Dec 10, 2012 4:48 AM #812646
All I can say, more force, and a little more easing, and more frames. Nice job, Kyz! <3
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Dec 10, 2012 11:42 AM #812817
Make more frames and ease it. Also show more force on the attacks.
Both elements didn't looked like what they should be.
Lightning should be fast, not a solid thing that stays in one place.
Fire should have particles going up, yours looked like a heart pumping at the start.
Make them more natural.
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Dec 10, 2012 5:05 PM #812990
Quote from Xrebellion
Make more frames and ease it. Also show more force on the attacks.
Both elements didn't looked like what they should be.
Lightning should be fast, not a solid thing that stays in one place.
Fire should have particles going up, yours looked like a heart pumping at the start.
Make them more natural.

Thanks for the advice, considering I'm about to start working on my first RHG battle I'm going to remember everything you said and I hope it will be some-what acceptable :)