Ok,here goes:

Fayte:
You did well,but honestly,it was too fast and a bit too smooth,it is nice to be smooth,but not too smooth.Also,whenever you made him spin his whip around,the after-effects were annoying and hurt my eyes,also,the spacing didn't seem right.You need to double-frame and if you are going to do after-effects,make sure that if it keeps on going like that,then the after-effect that is on the frame is...........Agh,I can't explain it,would this help?



I meant to put a spoiler around that,but I do not know how because I am a n00b.Maybe a mod can come by and edit this comment.If you are a mod or admin,please,do.

MatcroFoe:
SLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW your animation down,please! It is fast as can be,it has to be 30fps and no double-framing,I bet I missed 5 hits when I blinked.

thanks for the criticism mate. Ill keep that in mind next time.

Nice, fayte but remember next time to post your battle in the community animation forum , here it's not allowed

cool anim fayte
but does any1 notice that MaTcroFoe's anim has a striking resemblance to Hyun's one vs many....
or maybe its just me