RHG battle closed cause fileize and another

sans win :D

just wonderful.

Wow, I'm silly boy :p .

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Wow, I'm silly boy :p .

lol, i make it for entertaining dude...:p

Comments
Sans.FS:Very choppy(Not smooth) animaton but the cinematics made it better.
Kahate:Very choppy once again, the smoke effect made it better.
Results: Sorry for being rude, but I vote for Sans.FS.

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Comments
Sans.FS:Very choppy(Not smooth) animaton but the cinematics made it better.
Kahate:Very choppy once again, the smoke effect made it better.
Results: Sorry for being rude, but I vote for Sans.FS.

Thx pwnzer

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Comments
Sans.FS:Very choppy(Not smooth) animaton but the cinematics made it better.
Kahate:Very choppy once again, the smoke effect made it better.
Results: Sorry for being rude, but I vote for Sans.FS.

Yeah, We're choppy making animations :p . i'll try harder next using flash

I voted for no one.

EDIT: I voted for Kahate

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Comments
Sans.FS:Very choppy(Not smooth) animaton but the cinematics made it better.
Kahate:Very choppy once again, the smoke effect made it better.
Results: Sorry for being rude, but I vote for Sans.FS.

i would hope that explosion was better... cause that looked like a freaking sprite from terkoiz's BYE animation...

Critique Time!!!
sans: it was choppy and kinda confusing with the cinematics but i see you are fairly new to animating so not bad.

kahate: it was very choppy, when your guy was walking his legs werent moving... and the movements just seemed jumbled... sorry... oh also if that is a sprite from terkoizes animation... dont just copy and paste it just use it as a reference point and draw your own smoke imitating that sprite... again i see you are fairly new to animating so all and all it wasnt that bad

my vote goes to sans... sorry kahate

i recommend to both of you to practice in a higher frame rate, maybe 20, or 18 then progressively work your way into the higher fps, also work on basic movements, walking, running, things like that... angles i know we all love em but if you use em be sure that the stick figures are proportional... if they are only about 5 feet away from each other in a 2 d shot dont make them look like they are 50 feet away in an angle... resizing was a slight issue i saw... that a simple fix... and just practice some easy combos... :)

ok i hope this helps and you dont take it as me trying to be a complete ass about it i really am just trying to help you guys improve :)
Stay Awesome!

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i would hope that explosion was better... cause that looked like a freaking sprite from terkoiz's BYE animation...

Kahate, if you use a sprite like that, you better say its not yours, cause people can easily tell you did not make that smoke.
Both were really choppy... and I don't have another thing to say, just, keep practicing?

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i would hope that explosion was better... cause that looked like a freaking sprite from terkoiz's BYE animation...

Critique Time!!!
sans: it was choppy and kinda confusing with the cinematics but i see you are fairly new to animating so not bad.

kahate: it was very choppy, when your guy was walking his legs werent moving... and the movements just seemed jumbled... sorry... oh also if that is a sprite from terkoizes animation... dont just copy and paste it just use it as a reference point and draw your own smoke imitating that sprite... again i see you are fairly new to animating so all and all it wasnt that bad

my vote goes to sans... sorry kahate

i recommend to both of you to practice in a higher frame rate, maybe 20, or 18 then progressively work your way into the higher fps, also work on basic movements, walking, running, things like that... angles i know we all love em but if you use em be sure that the stick figures are proportional... if they are only about 5 feet away from each other in a 2 d shot dont make them look like they are 50 feet away in an angle... resizing was a slight issue i saw... that a simple fix... and just practice some easy combos... :)

ok i hope this helps and you dont take it as me trying to be a complete ass about it i really am just trying to help you guys improve :)
Stay Awesome!

he copy paste that? :eek:

thx for the critique , i will practice more about angles because is my first angles :D and some moves i will learn that

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he copy paste that? :eek:

thx for the critique , i will practice more about angles because is my first angles :D and some moves i will learn that

im not sure if he truely did but the fact that it looks almost exactly like the BYE explosions... idk

and yea no problem man im glad to help

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Kahate, if you use a sprite like that, you better say its not yours, cause people can easily tell you did not make that smoke.
Both were really choppy... and I don't have another thing to say, just, keep practicing?

It's true. but the explosion was make from Mark XD. He just wanted to help me :p

[edited] i don't think i said is true or not. But Mark XD gave me the flash file yesterday. he wanted to help me do an animation. but the "crappy" animation just finished. so i just added Effects only :/

Sans.FS:

+ V-CAM
+ Angles
+ Didn't need to watch it twice to understand.
+ it's finished!

- I-kill-you-with-one-hit-cause-i-am-awesome
- Choppy
- Short



KaHate:

+ it's finished!

- I-kill-you-with-one-hit-cause-i-am-awesome
- Choppy
- WTF that run
- Had to watch it twice to understand
- No music
- Sticks were too small.

So voted for Sans

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Sans.FS:

+ V-CAM
+ Angles
+ Didn't need to watch it twice to understand.
+ it's finished!

- I-kill-you-with-one-hit-cause-i-am-awesome
- Choppy
- Short



KaHate:

+ it's finished!

- I-kill-you-with-one-hit-cause-i-am-awesome
- Choppy
- WTF that run
- Had to watch it twice to understand
- No music
- Sticks were too small.

So voted for Sans

Thx blublu