pls lleave tips what i still need to work on =P

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1211144565

This is it completed...

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1211148386

just work on smoothness, and have him a little more relaxed, not all stiff and tense. Gj though i liked the background.

AAAAGGHH everyone says work on smoothness !!!!!!
i try and fail again =[

No, it's not fail. If you want to see fail go watch my movies. The moves were ok and the background was good. You just need to work on your smoothness.

Hmm, I'll try to say something that hasn't been said. Fill in the head.

I wouldn't say that's not smooth - it's choppy. Lacks a bit easing at some points.