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RMF's Med Beginner Attempt.

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RMF

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May 19, 2008 9:06 PM #138196
Aight', Here is my new animations and my tests:
New One: [EDITED]
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Walk and Run test:
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Punch > Backflip > Flip (the 2nd jump kinda sucked)
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Kinda "crouch" and a roll:
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May 19, 2008 9:13 PM #138210
i'd say the first one is med begginer. the only thing that i would try to improve on would be the running. other wise it was a med begginer animation.
RMF

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May 19, 2008 9:39 PM #138237
Ya, the running looked kinda choppy, I did another version of the running part:
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May 19, 2008 9:57 PM #138259
ya the running is definatly better. good job
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May 19, 2008 10:08 PM #138267
id still say low beginner though. well let me put you on a line:

low------|---med----------high--- border ---inter

the | is you so i suppose youre closer to med than low, but not quite there imo. i think you need to work on smoothness, stiffness, and lots of easing and for that reason im saying low beginner.

and also, did you vote on your own poll??? :/
RMF

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May 20, 2008 12:15 AM #138347
3 words:
lol

And, no, I didn't voted for my own poll -.-
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May 20, 2008 12:17 AM #138350
THATS 3 LETTERS
anyways
not med sorry
but work on the stiffness alot
it was pretty choppy and also ease more
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May 20, 2008 4:52 AM #138499
Looks low beginner to me.
The animation generally lacks easing...
Try not be lazy to put the hands on the back of the stick man while he's running, swing it around.
The back bones were stiff.
But your main problem was easing, try making small tests about it, okay?
Keep working. ;)
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May 20, 2008 6:14 AM #138513
low begginer.
srry.
your about halfway.
but there choppy and not easied.
NeCrOdE

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May 20, 2008 8:37 PM #138743
1st anim: good, i quite liked it

2nd: his back doesnt bend at all and it looks pretty akward+choppy. Look at some running and walking tuts.

3rd: backflip was good, relatively smooth. Roll was choppy, smooth it out. Make the punch faster, otherwise it was good.

4th: pretty good except for one not-so-small detail: when someone rolls they dont land headfirst XD (unless that was intended?), im pretty sure its handfirst.

i can't give you a rating (because im a newb :Sweating: )but like those other guys said easing is an issue (be patient and make a concious effort to ease all your movements)
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May 20, 2008 8:51 PM #138748
2 words.

Low beginner

The walk is weird,the run was like uuhh.. well... you know.bad
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May 20, 2008 9:40 PM #138775
Quote from Gunned.Stick.
The walk is weird,the run was like uuhh.. well... you know.bad

Ever heard of an edit button instead of multiposting for god's sake.
Join a forum and don't follow the rules, shit all the newbie's are following that fad.

As for the animations..
Low begginer.
You need to work on your movements better.
Work on your easing aswell.

Here's a small tip:
When you open up pivot and go to start an anim, try moving the stk say to the right 1 pixel, the 2, then 4. It helps a lot with easing.

http://upd.animatorhost.com/buddz/Eased_movement42du.piv

Here's an example.
RMF

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May 21, 2008 11:45 AM #139076
Quote from NeonFlame
THATS 3 LETTERS
anyways
not med sorry
but work on the stiffness alot
it was pretty choppy and also ease more


Lol = Laughing Out Loud which are 3 words you see?


@Ghost - Thank you.
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May 21, 2008 12:05 PM #139082
Quote from RMF
Lol = Laughing Out Loud which are 3 words you see?


@Ghost - Thank you.


But then you said L O L...Not laughing out loud.
Which makes it three letters..No matter what it stands for. O.o
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May 21, 2008 1:47 PM #139111
rofl (no longer using lol cos of this argument)
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