Anime girl (no clothes)

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Dec 28, 2012 10:23 PM #832682
Hey guys check out my DA for a new anime pic
http://xaioshadow.deviantart.com/#/d5plid6
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Dec 28, 2012 10:30 PM #832692
Umm..the chest should be placed lower beneath the neckline, I see no cornea or pupil, and it's not a manga, it's just a picture.
Clean up your lineart, and try adding highlighted strands in your hair.
Coloring is done well, but try to have the shading define the light source.
Other than that, it's fine.
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Dec 28, 2012 10:42 PM #832706
Quote from GroundXero
Umm..the chest should be placed lower beneath the neckline, I see no cornea or pupil, and it's not a manga, it's just a picture.
Clean up your lineart, and try adding highlighted strands in your hair.
Coloring is done well, but try to have the shading define the light source.
Other than that, it's fine.


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Oh the irony.

Pretty cool piece you have here, Xiao.
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Dec 28, 2012 10:48 PM #832709
lol, I'd actually see the irony in this.

Anyways, looks pretty nice! Are you really making a manga?
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Dec 28, 2012 10:50 PM #832711
no im just drawing people and stuff
to get the hang of SAI
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Dec 28, 2012 10:55 PM #832715
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Oh the irony.

Pretty cool piece you have here, Xiao.


"Quite a few people will show you their animation"
I don't see this moving >u>
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Dec 29, 2012 3:30 AM #833003
Tamen and Xero (especially you Xero) you should read my sig...

And I LOVE how you said no clothes to attract attention...
Tbh I came here hoping to see a bunch of retarded comments made by a bunch of 12 year olds who have never familiarized themselves with the concept of tits...

I am disappointed greatly...
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Dec 29, 2012 3:39 AM #833017
Quote from Tamen
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Oh the irony.

Pretty cool piece you have here, Xiao.


Where the f*ck is the damn LIKE button on this forum?
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Dec 29, 2012 3:50 AM #833037
AW SHITDUCK NO TITS!!!!
Love the background. Love the hair gradient. Love eye. But, this type of style might look nice with smoother lines,but idk. Also, who the hell can produce blue blushes?
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Dec 29, 2012 3:58 AM #833052
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Tamen and Xero (especially you Xero) you should read my sig...


Listen to quik...or listen to Weien..?
...
mmm
ermnnn
..yeah, Weien c:
Quote from Maroon
AW SHITDUCK NO TITS!!!!


can't stop till you get enough

My purpose here has been served.
I can now make my ascension..
*flies away*
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Dec 29, 2012 4:14 AM #833076
AW SHITDUCK NO TITS!!!!



lmfao XD

anyway nice art work
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Dec 29, 2012 4:50 AM #833117
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Listen to quik (who has learned this from multiple successful animators such as Kidkei, Zinx3rd, Kixx, Tocksique, Psyder, Drifts, and etc.) ...or listen to Weien..?
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mmm
ermnnn
..yeah, Weien c:


Fixed!
c:
c8
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Dec 29, 2012 8:11 AM #833306
Quote from GroundXero

can't stop till you get enough

My purpose here has been served.
I can now make my ascension..
*flies away*

Those aren't rainbows... where's the red and blue?