[Megaman Zero] - Flash Art

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Dec 31, 2012 9:58 AM #836213
Tablet and Flash art practice
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CnC please thx
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Dec 31, 2012 10:05 AM #836220
It;s pretty cool
And obviously I'm a MMZ fan.
Let's check what I like:
I like the cross-hatch shading you have going on there, like an old comic book style.
I also like the position you chose, though it could still use work.

now time for the cnc
Your line-art is really bumpy, imo it takes away the feel of the art rather than helps define it.
I the bumps were only along the outline of the figure, it'd give into the vibe more, but since it covers the entire lineart, it makes things crooked and unbalanced.
The eyes:
For Zero, his eyes are curved abit on the counter-clockwise side, fitting under the edges of his helmet.
It aids the fact that he has no eyebrows and would make it seem more natural.

I like it over-all, keep practicing.
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Dec 31, 2012 10:08 AM #836222
Quote from GroundXero
It;s pretty cool
And obviously I'm a MMZ fan.
Let's check what I like:
I like the cross-hatch shading you have going on there, like an old comic book style.
I also like the position you chose, though it could still use work.

now time for the cnc
Your line-art is really bumpy, imo it takes away the feel of the art rather than helps define it.
I the bumps were only along the outline of the figure, it'd give into the vibe more, but since it covers the entire lineart, it makes things crooked and unbalanced.
The eyes:
For Zero, his eyes are curved abit on the counter-clockwise side, fitting under the edges of his helmet.
It aids the fact that he has no eyebrows and would make it seem more natural.

I like it over-all, keep practicing.

Thanks, yeah my Flash was lagging so my tablet kept making those giant dots T_T
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Dec 31, 2012 10:09 AM #836223
some one make x please >: O
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Dec 31, 2012 10:12 AM #836227
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some one make x please >: O


If you could actually comment on the art, instead of complaining, that would be cool.
I've drawn him in the past but...meh..
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Dec 31, 2012 10:33 AM #836233
that was awesome dude :D can u make a MMX one too haha
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Dec 31, 2012 11:01 AM #836240
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that was awesome dude :D can u make a MMX one too haha


Thanks! Yeah I might..
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Dec 31, 2012 5:10 PM #836563
i love that shading style. i dont know if it was the best choice because it appears to have armor. but still very nice.
your improving gummy :)

GroundXero stole my CnC XP
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Dec 31, 2012 5:50 PM #836630
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i love that shading style. i dont know if it was the best choice because it appears to have armor. but still very nice.
your improving gummy :)

GroundXero stole my CnC XP


Thanks! c:
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Dec 31, 2012 7:17 PM #836757
i might suggest using a smaller brush size for your cross hatching. But then again, cross hatching is something i can't get right in software.
either way i like this a lot.
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Jan 1, 2013 10:50 AM #837621
Quote from Youwishjellyfish
i might suggest using a smaller brush size for your cross hatching. But then again, cross hatching is something i can't get right in software.
either way i like this a lot.


Thanks! I wasn't using a brush size, I was using pressure lol