My latest animimation part 1 really choppy i know but i r w0rk1ng 0n 1t f3ll4hs
Right stop with the 1337 talk, most don't understand it.
If you can't talk basic english GTFO.
I don't really remember you but from what you posted it was choppy.
Some bits were pretty nice, but i think you gotta work on reducing the stiffness and place a lil more heavy spacing in to your work.
I like what your trying to do there, but
it was choppy in places, and stiff, and uneased. It was also extememly Jerky.
I like the sort of setting you have with it, aswell.
Its pretty nice, I like the story line. But its not amazingly well animated.
Its pretty choppy as you said. When the guy gets out the of the hatch right at the beginning the leg movements are off. You should have finished the water efftect aswell. WOuld have made a really nice touch to it.
