Only took about 30 minutes or so... what do yall think?

http://konmaru-anims.deviantart.com/art/Takashi-new-pic-347363517?ga_submit_new=10%253A1357619751

CnC is welcome and wanted

dat sun look like its under him

Quote from Kingster7

dat sun look like its under him

how do i fix that?

the color of the dirt specks coming up from the grass do not go well with the color of the grass. the brown seems a bit odd
the shadow coming from your figure is a bit off.
the jagged edges coming out from the cliff could have been less sloppy.

how do i fix that?

make the sun either just above a bed of water at the bottom of the cliff so it shows depth and more feel to where it is set, or make the sun on the corner of the page either with clouds or without, whatever looks best.

anyway nice job over all and keep working at it! your doing great.

Quote from Stickly

the color of the dirt specks coming up from the grass do not go well with the color of the grass. the brown seems a bit odd
the shadow coming from your figure is a bit off.
the jagged edges coming out from the cliff could have been less sloppy.
make the sun either just above a bed of water at the bottom of the cliff so it shows depth and more feel to where it is set, or make the sun on the corner of the page either with clouds or without, whatever looks best.

anyway nice job over all and keep working at it! your doing great.

thanks for the feed back :)