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May 22, 2008 2:12 PM #139591
http://upd.animatorhost.com/Edward0/My_New_Combo_2vo6p.gif
This is my new combo

http://upd.animatorhost.com/Edward0/My_Old_Combo1fho.gif
This is my old combo

give me cc and give me some nice feedback on how i have improved
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May 22, 2008 3:44 PM #139643
the first one was an improvement, the second, you probably didn't put as much effort.

Now that you got rid of the skating choppy legs ...somewhat learn to use easing. Then you'll need to learn how get to get rid of stiffness.
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May 22, 2008 3:57 PM #139653
ultimate the second one is his old combo....
anyways
BIG IMPROVMENT
things to fix
FLUIDITY
STIFFNESS
EASING
NO MORE ICE FLOORING WHERE YOU SLIDE AROUND AND SHIT.
fix those and you should be good

iMPRovEMEnts
you lessened the sliding around
you let the stick man move more realisticly
and its smoother
keep working on it
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May 23, 2008 12:28 PM #140102
thanks to u both for the cc no one else seems to wat to
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May 24, 2008 12:21 PM #140773
dude, this is okk..... you have improved a ton (which is more than i can say for me) but the i agree with the whole idea of icy flooring, he does slide around alot, a little stiff, not choppy at all, little easing, (better than nothin) you will be a great pivoteer soon :)
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May 24, 2008 12:34 PM #140794
I dont like pivot but it was good.
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May 24, 2008 12:35 PM #140797
I dont like pivot but it was good. 1
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May 24, 2008 12:39 PM #140804
Juelz, Gtfo Spp Or Use Constructive Critisism, Dont Double Post You Noob, And Stop Spammin With Bad Comments, Grrrrr
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May 24, 2008 5:05 PM #140969
Sorry man...I need 20 post for my tut.
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May 24, 2008 6:44 PM #141004
Juelz, if you have read any of the rules there is one in particular about spamming...STOP SPAMMING...now Sherbert had no right to flame you because he is doing the exact same by flamming...but your posts are really starting to get annoying. You have to have 20 posts for a reason, so that we know you are using it, not just posting and leaving.....keep spamming and it will result in reports to moderators and may result in bannage.

Twords the animation: you have improved on your movement a lot and now all you need to do is work on more complex attacks...also work on your smoothness
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May 24, 2008 6:57 PM #141013
Quote from Juelz
Sorry man...I need 20 post for my tut.


For god sake, get 20 posts in a legitimae way, rather than spam like god damn ****ing crazy. Either become a decent member or get flamed and get banned.

Quote from Sherbet_productions
Juelz, Gtfo Spp Or Use Constructive Critisism, Dont Double Post You Noob, And Stop Spammin With Bad Comments, Grrrrr


Secondly, stop telling him not to spam and simply report his posts.


As for the animations, i can see a significant improvement.
I think that your should focus more on the movements while punching as well as the punching part itself.
Also, the bit under your sig is quite pathetic, as anyone who would know wouldn't be fooled as to say your sig is pivot.
Plus the zombie pages are a stupid fad.
HAPPY PIVOTING!!
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May 25, 2008 4:12 AM #141348
hahaahha lol thanks for killin my sig :( lol jks i made it in like 2 seconds

thanks for the cc i thort i had improved out of sight lol, any chance u can give me a ranking? and zombie i cool
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