Line is getting a little overused, so I am now switching to brush. PLEASE CNC! I realize he has no head, but I am looking more at the style of the anim, not the animation itself.

http://filz.us/hCp

WOW, your really improving fast... but you still have a resizing issue. You should use a guideline or grid tool. (CTRL+") oh and smoothness. More frames never hurt anyone :D

yes!
brush for the win :)
nice anim, but try to make the smoothing a little bit higher

looks like it's missing frames. some of your jumps are too fast. you're losing the momentum and giving the idea of teleporting.

and i prefer line btw

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Line is getting a little overused

I hope you mean by yourself?

You cant overuse Line tool, or Brush. Each of these 2 tools, have created over 100 of different animating styles. So dont give it that reason.

Also.... you are better with Brush i see. Keep it up, You Resized a bit at the start.......i dont mind, but also try to ease more.....do some exstra frames that make the movement flow more :3

Stop being so damn lazy and add heads. It will literally take you 30 seconds to zoom out, get a brush and add a dot to every head. Come on.

You're improving fast, good job!

But I have to agree with CrewKid, there is no excuse for not adding heads, unless you're just lazy.

alright :)

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Stop being so damn lazy and add heads. It will literally take you 30 seconds to zoom out, get a brush and add a dot to every head. Come on.

PFFT, Heads are gay...

On Topic,
Nice anim. I think that there should be more frames showing the momentum of the jump. It seems that he jumps with lots of force and gets no where.

Psh...brush and line are both overrated. Pencil all the way bitches!

Good anim by the way man. I don't really have anything to critique past what's already been said... Keep it up!

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Psh...brush and line are both overrated. Pencil all the way bitches!

Amen to that brother!

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I hope you mean by yourself?

You cant overuse Line tool, or Brush. Each of these 2 tools, have created over 100 of different animating styles. So dont give it that reason.

Also.... you are better with Brush i see. Keep it up, You Resized a bit at the start.......i dont mind, but also try to ease more.....do some exstra frames that make the movement flow more :3

Indeed. If we are going to the case, both line tool and brush are "overused"... the real thing that is overused are the style. There are a lot of people who tries to imitate Terkoiz's style, or Hyun's style and they don't create their own... I'm still trying to find mine... And i'm animating with line tool because i can't use a tablet anymore :c

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Indeed. If we are going to the case, both line tool and brush are "overused"... the real thing that is overused are the style. There are a lot of people who tries to imitate Terkoiz's style, or Hyun's style and they don't create their own... I'm still trying to find mine... And i'm animating with line tool because i can't use a tablet anymore :c

there might be people who try to imitate them, but dont think everybody using that style is deliberately trying to be like hyun, or terkoiz.. something a lot of people dont get is... there aren't an infinite amount of styles people can make.... most people (like myself and yourself) will use line tool cause we cant use mouse and brush, and we dont have a tablet. when i make my stickfigures, i make them look good depending on how i see them, relatively good body and leg size, arms being quite small compaired to others, but i like it, and heads that are smaller than mosts.... now i've never looked close enough into another animation to see if anybody else has this style... or anybody else uses it... And i kinda just went totally off topic


Ontopic: Nice dude, cool, but as they said, you re-size abit, just practice with grids or guides, soon enough the problem wont happen anymore.

Also try a weird-good technique, where you re-draw inside the same spot (onion skinned) with the next sort of hand motion/stance, then move it into place after (Mainly works with mid-air, as footing wont matter as much) it works for me with jumping :)

Dat style.

Hmm i cant veiw your animation so there :( would of liked to though And Tbh i though brush was used more then line am i wrong?