Line tool test

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Jan 15, 2013 12:03 AM #851538
Just testing it...

Update

Link= [video]http://www.filz.us/hCs[/video]

Sorry for using the direct, I haven't used the links at the bottem of the page before...
Anyways, since it WAS a test, I didn't try to get everything PERFECT...
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Jan 15, 2013 12:31 AM #851559
1. Don't upload the direct link. It shows outside of the V-Cam
2. That was actually pretty good. I suck at line style lol.
3. I see one thing wrong. The white stick's arms look a bit fast. Like idk what that windmill movement was lol.

Other than that good BG and good movement.
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Jan 15, 2013 12:43 AM #851563
The white stick is kinda leaning too much on the last pose.
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Jan 16, 2013 12:27 AM #852387
k...
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Jan 16, 2013 4:52 AM #852608
Pretty smooth and there wasn't as much chop as I expected from a newer animator. The v-cam gave it a nice, dynamic feel but it felt like a bit much... I would like to see something longer from you in the future to really get a grasp of your style.
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Jan 16, 2013 3:53 PM #852872
Quote from toramaki
Pretty smooth and there wasn't as much chop as I expected from a newer animator. The v-cam gave it a nice, dynamic feel but it felt like a bit much... I would like to see something longer from you in the future to really get a grasp of your style.


Thanks :). I understand the v-cam is a bit terrible, which seems to be the only problem in the animation from what I can see