The Stick (Rodger's new alias) was walking casually down the street when suddenly he heard an explosion about a mile away. He leapt onto a building and began running on the rooftops towards the explosion.

When he arrived, there was a rouge RHG fighter battling a team of 9 RHG's. He was chocking the first one, while swinging him at the others.

The Stick jumped up into the air and landed on the rouge RHG's shoulders. He began punching the RHG in the face, but got thrown off and landed in the fire. This caused the rouge RHG too drop the 9th RHG. The group of 9 RHGs said "Thanks, but we don't really need any newcomers to the RHG business!" simultaneously. 'I'm not new. I've been using these powers for 9 and a half years.' said The Stick. The Stick reached into his body and forced himself so close to death he could turn ultimate form but live after, and all the team saw was a bright blue flash and they saw the ultimate form of The Stick. The Stick whipped the rouge RHG with his tail so hard that his head was blown off. In order to recharge, he jumped on the rouge RHG and ate a chunk out of his arm. Blood splattered everywhere.


One of the 9 RHG's somehow psychically turned The Stick back into his normal form and healed him. "Sorry, you kind of.... uh.... lost control there." said the lady. "My name is Elizebeth. I hear you go by the name The Stick, but what's your real name?" asked Elizebeth.

"It's Rodger. Hey, come look at this!" said The Stick, pointing to the hole in the rouge RHG's arm. He pulled out a blood covered nanobot, made by the same corporation that made The Stick's nanobots that give him power, and his brother's nano-armor.

"My god.... It's made by the same people who gave me my powers!" said The Stick. "You're ri-" said Elizebeth, but she stopped as blood sprayed out of her chest. A blade had impaled her. She slipped off of the blade, revealing a completely black stick man with red eyes.

The Stick looked around. Body parts from the 9 RHGs were everywhere. One of them was still alive, and he limped towards The Stick, and said "He's here..." He fell over, and The Stick heard 21 gunshots, and looked at the man. He had morphed his hand into a gun with infinite ammo. The Stick dodged the bullets, and tried to tackle the man. He simple teleported away.


1 year later...

"Who's HE?"

"Have you heard the news? There are reported murders all over the globe caused by a pitch-black man, as dark as an empty void!"


These sentences were flying around conversations everywhere, but there was still one question..

'Who's The Stick?"

The Stick had reverted back to using his real name, Rodger, but he changed his name to Rodger The Stick. Rodger was travelling the world looking for the headquarters of the evil corporation that created the nano bots. Rodger finally found the building, and he jumped onto the logo. He broke the window and luckily broke into the CEO's office. He picked up the CEO by his shoulders and held him out of the window.


"You controlled my BROTHER...

You keep making soldiers to KILL ME....

You turned me into this... this monster!"
Rodger threw the CEO out the window. He ran downstairs and snapped the neck of a security guard then kicked another guard so hard he flew out the window. He turned some of the air around him into bombs and planted them on the walls. He created a remote detonator and jumped out the window. He hit the button on the way down and gave himself wings. The wings disintegrated in about 20 seconds but were enough for him to land safely. The shadowy man appeared infront of him. Rodger ran away as fast as he could, but he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned around and saw a huge hole in his shoulder. The dark man disappeared and Rodger fainted.



He woke up in a hospital room, covered in bandages.






THE END

"...said The Stick. The Stick reached into his body an..."
"...ultimate form of The Stick. The Stick whipped..."
You repeat names when you end the scentence. This really basic mistake you make twice after eachother and at some parts you dont really write(well), just say: then this happened, than he did that...
it was well written though and i liked it.
This scentense is awesome but you dont end it interesting:
How you wrote it:
She slipped off of the blade, revealing a completely black stick man with red eyes.
How i would have done it:
She slipped off of the blade, revealing a hooded black man. His red eyes were glowing under the shade of his hood.
But very well written and keep it up.

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"...said The Stick. The Stick reached into his body an..."
"...ultimate form of The Stick. The Stick whipped..."
You repeat names when you end the scentence. This really basic mistake you make twice after eachother and at some parts you dont really write(well), just say: then this happened, than he did that...
it was well written though and i liked it.
This scentense is awesome but you dont end it interesting:
How you wrote it:
She slipped off of the blade, revealing a completely black stick man with red eyes.
How i would have done it:
She slipped off of the blade, revealing a hooded black man. His red eyes were glowing under the shade of his hood.
But very well written and keep it up.

Yeah, but the black stick didn't have a hood.

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Yeah, but the black stick didn't have a hood.

thats just to make him look more mysterious (and cool and badass) :P