My own rap/poem

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Jan 18, 2013 1:49 AM #854057
I made this for my cousin,Luke,and on FluidAnims,he was called Modernfish.These are his real friends,and,I even include my own name in it! :D
Its a rap,which I plan on singing in front of a crowd ;)

Hey,yall,Luke is a poor boy
Who gets good grades
But he feel like he was deployed
On this planet of aids
He gets picked on by the bosses
Not great kids
Swollen lip glosses
From those punches and those hits
His two friends are Josiah and Kevin
A good group of friends
Hey,my name is Evan
Anyways,this is what happened
One day as Luke was walking
He got punched by a street dude
Luke hit back
Despite it being rude
The guy looked back,turned out he was a mafia boss
Kindess is what he lacked
And so started the chaos
Luke ended up with a black and blue eye
To the world luke said “Bye!”
And ended up with a broken nose
Luke tried to get back up,
But was real tired
He kept struggling BUT
His legs felt fired
He fell back down
Layed there for a while
Fell asleep
In the world of his denial
Luke soon woke up
To see his friend Josiah
His brain felt corrupt
He felt on top of the himilaya
He got up on his feet
Said he got jumped
He said it didn’t feel neat
The idea he just got bumped
Josiah took him home,
Home,safe and sound
Luke said in a low voice tone
That he got thrown to the ground
Josiah looked real worried
Worried indeed
He told Luke to rest
And Josiah pumped his chest
He promised he’d take revenge
On that guy from on the street
It all summed up
When Luke said it didn’t feel neat
Luke woke up that morning,
Went outside
Got kicked to the ground
From a bully whose parents died
Along came another boy
Who helped Luke out
He said his name was Elroy
And that hes gone down the same route
He said to luke that he’d take him to his dojo
He kept his promises
But said to beware of his dog “Mojo”
Luke got trained,in the way of the ninja
He soon got named
Luke….the ninja!!
He saw the same guy again
Alone on the streets
He felt like Daniel in the Lions Den
And he felt he had the beats
The guy ran at Luke
He tried to fight
But Luke blew him like a nuke
For he underestimated Luke’s might
But that’s the boring part
I’m not near the end
Because the guy shot up like a dart
And his frown began to bend
He said to Luke
I see you’ve improved
And said to keep up each Duke
Cuz he was about to get moved
He snapped his fingers twice
Out came two people
They didn’t look nice
They looked like mean dudes off a steeple
He snapped his fingers over and over
Out came the fighters
Luke got ready to rumble
Under his lips he began to mumble
“Now,Elroy!” Out came Elroy,
Hot as fire
He looked strong as me
And,yeah,that’s a good key
Two vs Many
The fight was about to begin
Luke was stronger than any
And was about to throw them all in the recycle bin!
They all charged,the boss stayed back
Watch the fight go on
As he just stood there and took a nap
Luke was showing his skills
And going for the kills
Yeah,he looked so mad
That he was as scary as my dad!
One,two,take down a few,
Three,four,take down more,
Five,six,their brain now ticks
Seven,eight, Luke’s looking great
Nine,ten,HE WAS TAKING DOWN ALL OF THEM
They all got up,
Knocked down his partner
Luke got worried
As they mowed him like a farmer
Luke threw double kicks
None of them were good
He soon got some trips
As he went down and hit the ground
Luke’s master got up
Strangled one or two
But that was of no use
As they kicked him back into the pues
Luke’s adrenaline rushed
As he got back up
He beat them all
Cuz’ this guys had enough
After 10 minutes of fighting
Luke was exhausted
He fell to the floor
As his muscles felt BLASTED
As for the Mafia boss
Despite Luke being vunerable
Stepped out of the way
And ran out the door
Josiah found him again,
Lying on the floor
He looked the other way
And saw even more!
:D

CnC???? :O