more combat practice

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Jan 18, 2013 10:14 PM #854904
http://zee200.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d5rwj4h

more practice
this time it for blocks and doges and recovering from someone doge
cnc pls
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Jan 22, 2013 5:14 PM #858994
wow, to me it looks like your improving with fluidity and combos. This is very nicely done, maybe see if you can change the way the guy falls tho? it looks a bit awkward, But everything else is looking good :) nice job.
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Jan 23, 2013 12:19 AM #859329
For the most part, that was really nice! I like your style, with the stick figure outlines and blur effects. The foot movement in the punches and doges was great too.

The only thing I would criticize is the jump at the end from the yellow guy, saw a little bit of wobbliness there, and the fall from the red guy when he hits the ground; it looked like you kinda gave it the bounce effect, but you didn't follow through with easing.

Besides that, it's looking pretty good!