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Jan 21, 2013 8:53 AM #857569
This six practice :)

http://www.fileize.com/view/c6e14e6d-4f2/
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Jan 23, 2013 12:29 AM #859332
Excellent! I love the easing you applied to all of the short tests, had very real characteristics. Maybe one thing I would work on though is giving your stick figures more "bend", try to make them bend there arms legs and torso more, to help make it look a little more real. Like in the ones where the grey stick attacks with the sword and the black fire ball, maybe more arm bending instead of just rotating the arm right over the head, more like how you did with the punch at the beginning. I know it might be difficult because you're using lines, but it'd make a big difference.

On the positive side, everything else was great: really good easing and feel of smooth stick figure movement, used a lot of frames, very nice full body drawings and animation, no wobbliness or resizing, or any major flaws in general.

Keep it up!
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Jan 23, 2013 10:47 AM #859658
Thanks for Intellectual.