At least it's a tiny bit better than all the crap floating around here. http://thezyles.deviantart.com/#/d5snm8z

PS: Why the fuck can't I change the title

I like it.
The only issue I see is the top...the...cap...thing, sorry I forgot what it's called.
It look less leike part of the mushroom and more like someone had landed from above with a parachute.
It still looks really good.

Yeah, I know. I was struggling big time trying to fix it; couldn't do it without changing the entire drawing so I just said fuck it. Much appreciated!

badass lineart.

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I like it.
The only issue I see is the top...the...cap...thing, sorry I forgot what it's called.
It look less leike part of the mushroom and more like someone had landed from above with a parachute.
It still looks really good.

(Yeah, it's called a cap)
What would fix this is a spotty texture, maybe pours of some kind, and more lines radiating from the stem underneath the cap to represent the gills.
If you plan on coloring this, please do it soon.
This looks incredibly impressive.

Yeah, I'm busy coloring it right now, it's hard though. Not really used to it.

What kind of color scheme are you using? When I ask that, I mean are you going for one of the usual red or purple caps with a pale tan base? Or are you going for something a bit funkier?

You can check it out on DA right now, I wanted to go for a bleak kind of sepia look.

Guys, I need more critique

I like the concept, but the color scheme seems off a bit :-\ also, i think the cap could be a bit bigger, and maybe not so much of the underside showing. The edges of the growth look rlly nice tho, and overall i think it was almost professionally made, well done :D

Reminds me of the flood in halo.

I get what you guys are talking about regarding the cap now. I'd have to edit the entire drawing to fix it, though; I can't be fucked.