Stick Empires Story Competition!

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Jan 29, 2013 3:09 AM #865774
So, I'm bored a lot, and I find I read the stories on the forums to ease my boredom. I thought, why not make stories for Stick Empires? So here is the FIRST EVER Stick Empires Story Competition! Basically, write a story about stick empires (I'll think of a subject), and post it in this thread. I suppose I'll make another thread with all of the stories' titles and make a poll after the competition is done.
RULES (Click to Show)

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I'm excited to see your great stories! Good luck everyone! I'll write a story too. :D
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Jan 29, 2013 3:15 AM #865785
Yay! I'll try my best.

Is there any limit to how long the story has to be?
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Jan 29, 2013 3:23 AM #865796
Can it be deep, cliche, etc?

Cause then I can write a 2nd Person angsty novel.
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Jan 29, 2013 3:24 AM #865799
Whatever you want, as long it stays on topic.
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Jan 29, 2013 3:28 AM #865809
Can we have multiple entries?

EDIT: I'm putting my entries in this post! Since I plan on having multiple entries, they would be in multiple posts so they are compiled here for convenience! Also, I want my posts on page 1

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Jan 29, 2013 3:30 AM #865813
Yes. I will add that to the RULES.
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Jan 29, 2013 4:14 AM #865846
i already have a story

but it will be hidden till its complete
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Jan 29, 2013 4:16 AM #865847
I will bet you 500 ECoins that it doesn't have proper punctuation, grammar, etc. :D
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Jan 29, 2013 4:20 AM #865854
so, why don't you make a story captain grammar. i do believe everything lies within the actual story not its punctuation and grammar.

now if you shall excuse me i have a story to brainstorm even further and a thread I'm currently working on to finish
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Jan 29, 2013 4:24 AM #865855
Well, I'm just saying. The requirements DO say that you need proper grammar/punctuation, and there really was no need to announce that you had a story ready.

And it's general grammar, thank you very much :D
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Jan 29, 2013 5:55 AM #865914
Well you can always edit, right?
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Jan 29, 2013 7:16 AM #865939
i got two things to ask ye jli

do you dislike me in some way i don't know of, because everything Ive ever posted, you always replied in some negative way
also that little smiley face is not making the sentence seem any happier in my eyes, its only adding to the fact that your insulting my grammar.

also a question for dragonfrost. must the topic instantly start at the beginning of the story or can it slowly build up to the main topic.

i also cannot wait to see all the other peoples stories and what they have to tell
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Jan 29, 2013 2:42 PM #866165
Well, OK, here's the thing.
To be bluntly honest, your posts hurt my eyes. I don't know whether I'm not used to reading posts like yours, or my time on Reddit has brainwashed me, or I need some serious medical attention, but I find your posts exceptionally difficult to read compared to others.

I was simply suggesting that you capitalize a few things to make it a lot easier on everyone to read. I never meant to be negative or discouraging in my posts, and if that is what you think then I apologize.
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Jan 29, 2013 6:05 PM #866272
T.T guys don't argue on my thread.
Story 1: The Rise of Chaos: Magikills Save The Day! (Click to Show)
Darn, although it is more than 150 words, I still feel it is quite short.
The Rise of Chaos: Magikills Are The Enemy! (Click to Show)

I like my second one better :D
SHAME ON ME I FAILED AT PERSPECTIVE :/
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Jan 29, 2013 8:33 PM #866347
My story:

Medusa was mad that her name started with Medusa. So she bought a Crawler to help change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Juggerknight to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Marrowkai to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Giant to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought an Eclispsor to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Dead to change her name. But it didn't.

So she bought a Bomber to change her name. It exploded and her name became...

DEMUAS

And she decided to attack Order because they started to make fun of her name.

VOTE 1 -5 stars.