Ok, so I wanted to have a new character, aaand I wrote his demo. Now I want you *Uncle Sam Point* to CnC and give suggestions about it! :D anything is appreciated so tell me what you think of the possible character and the demo :D
http://www.wattpad.com/11643419-no-one-listens
Possible New Promo???
Started by: SpeerMintty | Replies: 4 | Views: 418
Jan 30, 2013 1:41 AM #866542
Jan 30, 2013 2:09 AM #866579
Quote from SpeerMinttyOk, so I wanted to have a new character, aaand I wrote his demo. Now I want you *Uncle Sam Point* to CnC and give suggestions about it! :D anything is appreciated so tell me what you think of the possible character and the demo :D
http://www.wattpad.com/11643419-no-one-listens
You use the word 'man' a lot. This happened with that old tryout you sent me as well. Better come up with some synonyms to fix that.
As for your new character...what in bloody hell IS he?!
Jan 30, 2013 2:14 AM #866589
he's a twelve year old boy :3 but yea, its a habit for saying "man" a lot >< ill try and fix that
Jan 30, 2013 2:25 AM #866607
Quote from SpeerMinttyhe's a twelve year old boy :3 but yea, its a habit for saying "man" a lot >< ill try and fix that
TWELVE YEAR OLD BOY?! ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! HE ENTRAPS HIS VICTIMS IN A VILE SLUDGE, VIOLENTLY MAULING THEM AND RAMBLING HORRIBLE, BLOOD SUCKING THOUGHTS, AND YOU THINK HE'S JUST A TWELVE YEAR OLD BOY?!?!?!?!
He's obviously thirteen >_>
Jan 30, 2013 2:33 AM #866616
I know XD isnt it awesome :P Ill probably try and post the new character tonight :P in fact I'll do it now and it should explain XD