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Jan 31, 2013 9:48 PM #868451
http://www.fileize.com/view/d0000637-f43/
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Jan 31, 2013 9:52 PM #868454
good easing, but he appears to have rubber legs?
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Jan 31, 2013 10:44 PM #868499
The best part is the particles. Basics and practicing. Keep it going.
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Feb 1, 2013 1:02 AM #868630
Post these in the clan thread as well so I can update your animation section :3 you are improving a lot, keep it up :D
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Feb 1, 2013 1:28 PM #869076
Purple effect is good.
Posture is fine.
But it feels a little slow. 'u'
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Feb 1, 2013 7:51 PM #869352
thanks for the cnc
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Feb 1, 2013 11:13 PM #869510
Should have a change of sppe
for example speed up to attack ease out speed up for next hit but otherwise ready smooth nice particles
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Feb 2, 2013 2:05 AM #869630
It's good. But I'd like to give some of my thoughts on the animation.

I personally thought that the attacks were a little bit too slow. (If it's your style, then fine, but that's just something I've noticed). The punches were fine. They were all in one place and they were consistent. However, maybe some more force can be applied to them, rather than just standing there and punching blindly like shown in the animation.

Also, I thought that the upward kick was unrealistic and the leg that had kicked had resized a bit. Make sure to keep a consistency on your stick limbs so they don't just grow beyond size out and about. Also, it looked a little choppy, and I think you could manage throwing in a few more frames to make the kick flow nicely.

Lastly, I'd like to say that the blast particles coming out of the sticks hands at the end were done well. I really liked those. I had a problem when the stick just froze when the beam/blast had came out of the hands, though. Maybe it could have shown some movement on the stick so it just doesn't freeze completely.

Overall, it was pretty good. Good luck improving! :)