test animation

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Feb 9, 2013 2:59 PM #878146
hey guys, I'm new to Stickpage. i thought that i might as well post up some test animations just so i can get some feedback on them.
[swf="http://www.fileize.com/files/dcac2461/24d/test1-again.swf"]height=400 width=700[/swf]

please, if you don't like it, then dont just say "its crap, i shouldn't be on here" or non helpful stuff like that. tell me when i need to do to improve.
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Feb 9, 2013 4:22 PM #878226
that's cool enough than my animation. Impressive :D
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Feb 9, 2013 4:24 PM #878228
thanks mate, got any ideas on how to improve? i know its short, so don't say stuff like make it longer, but i mean fluidity wise etc.
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Feb 9, 2013 4:27 PM #878236
well the first little jump thing is a little weird but its very smooth and flowing compared to a lot of stuff on here, nice job :)
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Feb 9, 2013 5:08 PM #878296
Damn man that is smooth!
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Feb 9, 2013 5:11 PM #878302
Well when the stick hits the wall or whatever it was his legs should've bent to show he hit something and anticipation for the jump off. Also what Cruel said. Hope I helped. :)
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Feb 9, 2013 6:13 PM #878369
thanks guys, ill prob update it later and post it up again. thanks :)