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My RHG Faziri

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Feb 10, 2013 11:45 AM #879256
drawing by markXD
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Name: faziri

colour body: #000000

Wepons: she have poison red power and the wooden axe to kill the people

About: she is only a little and pretty girl, she never die before

weakness: sry and pretty person

Story:

Faziri was give birth in the long ago the old hunted house, but faziri is 3 years old her parents die. faziri is very sad and crying. one day, faziri find her big bother call he fazara. he is 15 years old. he is olso hunted moster, they faziri say the quesion for her big bother "hey bother long time no see" faziri awser, fazara say 'long time no see too my littie sister" he awser back. 4 years after, her big bother is dead in 20 years old. she is very angry for look for her big bother. faziri 12 years old to kill her hunted friends, she is very have something bad things for her mother die before. she is become want to killing all eneimes and eneny now. after 50 years after, she is very sad for her farther, mother and her big bother.


11 years after:

She now don have many friend for her, they all girl say: she is so ugly!" the girls say, faziri is still sad right now.

17 years after:

faziri enter the 15 years, faziri is now want to kill all eneny now. faziri awser: i don want become a good girl, i don want to thinging my father, mother and my big bother anymore, i must kill, kill, kill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" faziri say
she go out side a hunted house she want to keep a mouse to eat mouse blood, she pushed, the mouse is dead............... she make a drink to make a milk blood.

after 50 years:

she killed eneny everytime.............................

Demo: http://www.fileize.com/view/0075ccca-b06/

faziri prantice
http://www.filz.us/pRq
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just make my new story.............:)
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Feb 10, 2013 11:56 AM #879269
Quote from Leroy, Franz
I feel bad for the creator of this, every thread he make always get trashed. But your picture supposed to be uploaded in a image hosting site. And also your demo should be made before creating this RHG. I can't report this since I feel bad for this guy (lol), someone report him >.>


guy?i think its a girl cuz the magnum clan call her her when she made a clan fan art
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Feb 10, 2013 11:59 AM #879275
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RHG character

Dude, you should know, that making a RHG without a demo means an insta-lock.
If you're hard at making demo, try your luck in wRHG.
P.S: Always listen to the rules before making something.
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Feb 10, 2013 12:05 PM #879278
Im hard doing my charater picture but i must keep doing
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Feb 10, 2013 12:08 PM #879279
Quote from regularshow220
Im hard doing my charater picture but i must keep doing

Everyone have a tough fight to find their RHG character, but a great RHG character needs a demo.
If you want to be known as a great RHG,you must make a demo to show your abilities as animator.

And if you're hard at art, try at writing (I know you still 13 yrs old, but even children can do something).
Here is the links for wRHG:http://forums.stickpage.com/forumdisplay.php?73-wRHG-Characters

Anyway, keep improving, and people will respect you.(I'm being a motivator here :p)
P.S: Work on your grammar.
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Feb 10, 2013 12:13 PM #879281
Quote from regularshow220
Im hard doing my charater picture but i must keep doing

so don't do it, you know this is spam right, most of the thing you do is go to trash can, do you learn any thing from that, no, not keep doing
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Feb 12, 2013 11:40 AM #881395
awwwww,
mouse blood :/


it creeps me out,

haha:D
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Feb 12, 2013 11:42 PM #881988
I'm not going to even tell you the stuff wrong with this thread. But other than that nice RHG :D
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Feb 13, 2013 12:17 AM #882008
thank red death
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Feb 13, 2013 2:05 AM #882102
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thank red death


i'm currently battling red death,
don't worry, he is going down :)
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Feb 13, 2013 6:24 AM #882279
oh thats good :)
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Feb 13, 2013 9:07 AM #882338
Huh you can add more abilities and more detailed description about how she fights
and in the story... who are her enemies and how her brother died?... are they secret?
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Feb 13, 2013 7:07 PM #882817
omg you should have a demo
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Feb 14, 2013 9:59 AM #883420
Do you have a Micromedia Flash 8? Cause that picture looks to easy..what's that brown stuff..is it a hair..

You don't use "not yet" at the demo..just type "Coming Soon". The words "not yet" is for "Battle: not yet"...
just giving a thumps up
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Feb 14, 2013 10:03 AM #883422
ok i will changed coming soon :)
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