1.)First: Nice feet.
-Ah, dat shading. It's on point. I mean, it's in the right places within the folds of her dress.
-The button moves with the folds of the clothes. I was happy to notice that. :D
-The girl's wrist, the one grabbing the cobweb, is to wide.

2.) Second:
-The ear looks a bit strange, but maybe that's because it's an elf ear. Anyway, it looks like it is to high up.
-Her head seems large compared to her body.
-The water effect is a nice touch, the water and the girls colors add a cool contrast to the dark background.
-The arm farthest away seems too short.
-The cat's anatomy is well drawn, I like that you added the glow to help it stand out.

3.)Third
-Strange pose, but still, I give dat anatomy a thumbs up.
- The folds are all in the right places. leik, omg kawaii desu.
-the torso, kind of looks more like the beginning of a mans body.

4.) Fourth
Dark souls reference?(never played it myself)
-Not much I can say was bad about this piece, seems like something you really invested into.
-The girl compared to the background really stands out. Not that it's bad, I like it: the enemies sort of blend in though.
-The shading and lighting is good. especially on the pillars.
-The little designs on the pillars was a nice touch too.

5.)FifthPanty shots! 0///0
I would like to see this finalized, I'd hate to repeat things I've already said but as usual; you got the anatomy down pack.
-The hanging foot is kind of large.

Panty shots...
6.) Sixth:
-The right ankle doesn't look connected to the feet. What I mean by this is, you drew the ankle wider than the foot.
-For a first time coloring a tree I think you designed and colored it really well.
-The background is great, I love the sketchy look.

7.)Seventh:
Yeah, I have nothing to say that I haven't already said.
For things that are wrong with it I don't really see it.
Yeeah, not much else to say.