just an idea I've been thinking about for a while

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Feb 14, 2013 2:11 PM #883563
I haven't worked out the story yet but this is what I have so far:
It's about in apocalyptic world where a person(still haven't figured out the name) try to make it to the(place where its supposed not have been affected by the giant earthquake still need a name for this to) where he hopes his family and friends will be. He has been going from sector to sector in hopes to find his family with no luck but instead make new friends who join along the way where they fight for their lives against bandits, the evil militia who are trying to bring new world order which have a wide spread control, of course they journey also take them through the toxic wasteland where they fight hordes of zombies of course.but they find along the way is more what they can handle. They find out that the militia have actually been watching their every step and are forcing them to work for them if they ever want to see their families and now they must fight for the militia taking out the rebels camps and doing their dirty work. The more the decide to help the militia the more they are torn apart because each them want something different (maybe they were promised their families or safety from the dangers that roam the earth like I said I still have to work on the story) but some of them are starting to thing they have done enough to get what they want(or maybe they were offered a way out at some point and have to decide whether to take it or help the other guys get out as well not sure) and the harder they realize that they are fighting their way to their own doom.

if you guys have any changes or ideas please let me know
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Feb 14, 2013 4:58 PM #883706
Why are you even posting this? Are you looking for feedback on the storyline you have made, or even praise? You seemed to have slapped on a hastily thought out, clichéd plot which is little more than a bare skeleton, likely done without a moment's notice. If you want to show your commitment, and thus worthy of having your work read, you should just go back and take the time to write our the first chapter of your story before coming back. If not, I suggest you take your word dumps elsewhere.
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Feb 14, 2013 6:24 PM #883820
ok if you didn't like what I posted their is a quick solution for how to solve. You see that red X on the top right corner of your screen click it and all your porbelms are solved