The jump was nice, but dont blur so much. like remove the blur then put it back some frames later for a cool effect.
Also, The smoke was weird to how he landed, I wouldn't go through a floor if I was coming from that speed, I would land very hard and my body would SPLAAAAAAAASH but nah. Also makes some rocks at the sides, now it just looks like he went straight in it or something like it was butta. maybe vcam it.
i like it, it's quite "unique" lol XD, but it needs more y axis blur than x...infact for a jump it dosent need x axis at all, try posting both that and without blur. But it looks very good.