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Feb 21, 2013 5:18 AM #890931
Me and my brother wanted to do something fun. So we did. http://www.youtube.com/user/ThePixelPair?feature=mhee
I'd be grateful if you check it out, and told me what you think. I'm new to this and don't know much about it, but I'm doing my best. I'm not gonna be annoying and ask you to subscribe, or like, or whatever but if you could just check one or two of em out I'd like it. I'm going to warn you ahead of time that the first one was done with shitty equipment, but we decided to spend some money on a better mic and the new ones sound better.
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Feb 21, 2013 9:32 AM #891015
Purty cool commentary. I just assumed you're Brian in the hopes that you are actually Brian.
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Feb 21, 2013 1:30 PM #891147
Nice shit.
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Feb 21, 2013 1:32 PM #891150
Aww, cool
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Feb 21, 2013 9:38 PM #891656
New episode up guys! Also I'd like some ideas for other games we should play.

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Purty cool commentary. I just assumed you're Brian in the hopes that you are actually Brian.


I am indeed the blonde haired Brian.
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Feb 22, 2013 12:59 AM #891814
Ok, so a few things that may help your commentating in the future

1)Be natural.
Its seems like you both are nervous and shaky in some of your episodes, let it be natural and just flow and try to make it funny. You improved in your later episodes at this.

2)Don't fill
Don't drag out a joke or make random singing or songs to fill in space. You did this minimally but it was still there

3)Have jokes in mind
Don't drop cheesy one liners but try to make it entertaining. You did this pretty well actually, your wittier than the average chap.

4) I love you <3


Just some cnc for you there, nice job though, I subbed. Turn down the game music volume if you can, if not then turn down the game volume a little bit.
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