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iPad Art - Fordz Shadowfall [ RHG ]

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Feb 21, 2013 2:35 PM #891260
My fifth attempt in drawing my RHG.
CnC is very much appreciated.

Drawn in iPad entirely by FINGER so there must be flaws right?

http://ninjafordz.deviantart.com/art/iPad-Art-Fordz-Shadowfall-5-355584088
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Compared to my first attempt:
Failed First Attempt (Click to Show)


Once Again. CnC :)

My RHG link is on my signature.
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Feb 21, 2013 2:37 PM #891269
That was on your Ipad, amazing. Everything is fine except the eyes on the face. Apart from that, it is really good :D
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Feb 21, 2013 2:41 PM #891279
What's with the eyes? .-.
Please explain further. Criticize.
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Feb 21, 2013 2:42 PM #891284
The perspective is off, especially in his upper body and upper part of the picture in general (especially in that arm, oh jesus)
I really just cant appreciate your style of eyes and faces, it just puts me off.
I guess it just reminds me too much of that fucktarded moe shit
Besides that, his facial proportions dont make much anatomical sense to begin with.
The chains look sloppily made and some of the links dont make sense in relation to the direction of the movement.
Its alright though, and for being made on an Ipad, its pretty good work.
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Feb 21, 2013 2:48 PM #891296
Yup, the forehead does not give enough space for the eyes to fit

@Drone, do you always have to CnC that hard?
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Feb 21, 2013 2:58 PM #891324
Quote from Imada
Yup, the forehead does not give enough space for the eyes to fit

@Drone, do you always have to CnC that hard?


Its not harsh
"The truth shall set you free"
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Feb 21, 2013 3:16 PM #891353
Quote from Drone
The perspective is off, especially in his upper body and upper part of the picture in general (especially in that arm, oh jesus)
I really just cant appreciate your style of eyes and faces, it just puts me off.
I guess it just reminds me too much of that fucktarded moe shit
Besideas that, his facial proportions dont make much anatomical sense to begin with.
The chains look sloppily made and some of the links dont make sense in relation to the direction of the movement.
Its alright though, and for being made on an Ipad, its pretty good work.


LoL. I don't even know how to make chains and the texture of Austinetic Stainless Steel.
I'm not experienced with chains. I didn't make a face guide by the way, it might be the reason. XD
About the arm, just noticed, lol.

Also about the style, I kinda messed it up since I already made it but a retarded boy deleted the scythe and shadings part so I had to make it again. The chains, they were fine
;.;

What do the face and eye styles remind you of?
BTW, thanks for the CnC, it was a bit harsh though lol but all is necessary for improvements :)

Damn, I need to change my anime style...
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Feb 22, 2013 4:51 PM #892455
His head and face doesn't look right, it's too flat.
His hands actually look good, though the fist facing us is too fat.
His right leg. There should be more foreshortening, because looking at his foot which is relatively too large, you were obviously trying to draw an angle.
You did a pretty good job on the blades and chains though, and his hair shading is impressive.
All in all it's pretty mediocre, from someone with your skills at least.