Arvine Callahan (Triss) vs Ninjakill (Azxc)

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Feb 25, 2013 11:29 AM #896464

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Well, from what I heard from people, this is your story problem:
1. It's too simple, add more twist and ups with downs.
2. The layout was bad, because it's a bit too tight.
3. The description of the characters were lacking.
4. Grammar means your writing corrections and mistakes. An example off grammar errors is:
WyzDM wass too off.
5. You doesn't seem to put much thought to it.

EDIT: Kickass your comment are really harsh. You should instropect yourself.

:/ Got it
I don't know what types of styles/storylines do you guys like.....
I don't think my storyline is such "simple", "bad", "rubbish", "trash", "gay", etc
I am a loser here, I am out

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Feb 25, 2013 11:40 AM #896482

"Despite my hate agains doing things like this" (Tino)
I still vote for Triss, because it's obvious he put alot more time and effort into his story than azxc did.

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Feb 25, 2013 11:47 AM #896489

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:/ Got it
I don't know what types of styles/storylines do you guys like.....
I don't think my storyline is such "simple", "bad", "rubbish", "trash", "gay", etc
I am a loser here, I am out

Azxc is sulking lol. Dont worry Azxc, remember, there are always people who are more bad at something more than you.

Doing some digging here. These here are complete loss.
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?46687-coboy-bodacious-(bodacious)-vs-subzero-(nox)
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?46390-SJCRPV-(Sebastian)-vs-Lobotomizer-(Kalena-Eirwen)
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?47509-Cowboy-bodacious-(bodacious)-vs-Lobotomizer-(Kalena)

And dont hate me for this.

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Feb 25, 2013 11:49 AM #896492

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Azxc is sulking lol.

Oh well, you win some, you lose some

DEAL WITH IT

Joke

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Feb 25, 2013 12:01 PM #896500

Well, others accept losses quite cool. Like CB.

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Feb 25, 2013 12:02 PM #896501

And justino. he was like... oh well.

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Feb 25, 2013 1:24 PM #896577

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Obviously, Triss wins. :P

Not really, Azxc could win if he gets 8 votes in remaining 8-9 days.

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Feb 26, 2013 10:04 AM #897629

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"Despite my hate agains doing things like this" (Tino)
I still vote for Triss, because it's obvious he put alot more time and effort into his story than azxc did.

.... I think I did my best to make my work :/
Perhaps Asians are no matches with the Western

(idk where does Triss live)

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Feb 26, 2013 10:10 AM #897639

You cant win against people who got English as their first language. Nor do I (perhaps?)

And you havent answered me yet, about our battle >:(

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Feb 26, 2013 11:55 AM #897694

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Triss lives in America, xD.

I live in School.Inc

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You cant win against people who got English as their first language. Nor do I (perhaps?)

And you havent answered me yet, about our battle >:(

Hell no, English isn't my first language.

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Feb 26, 2013 12:06 PM #897713

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I live in School.Inc

Hell no, English isn't my first language.

Eh? Americans dont study English as their first language? Weird.

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Feb 26, 2013 12:36 PM #897738

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Eh? Americans dont study English as their first language? Weird.

I don't live in America.
I live in School.Inc

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Feb 26, 2013 3:27 PM #897842

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I don't live in America.
I live in School.Inc

Fine, whatever.

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Feb 27, 2013 12:36 AM #898303

We really dont XD we already know english when we go into school, our vocabulary builds and all that, but usually we learn spanish or french, me, I learn Latin! XD

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Feb 27, 2013 12:52 AM #898320

What are you all doing, a wise man once quoted.

"shut the hell up or be banned"

Get back on topic perhaps?