ok let me get this straight..... this is a start of a series im thinkin of doin a bit like prison break but without the whole smartness and the main character getting himself locked in jail to save his brother who is innocent but in jail. anyway i want u to comment on 3 things
1: camera angles
2: should i continue
3: anything that is wrong with it C&C




http://upd.animatorhost.com/Edward0/Jail_Escape_1lz4t.gif

looks high beginner ish.
Erm
The zoom was alright.
i still think you should focus a little more on simpler things at the moment, such as short combo scenes and fight scenes. Untill you feel liek you can do a Story line aniamtion

high beg ish :) :) omfg yay and i will continue on simpler things

i liked the zoom... but the whole thing was kinda lame
i think you should get a bit more experiance and start over with a bit newer ideas (im new but i can tell yours needs a bit of work... not trying to be rude)

Nothing even moved.
How the hell can you call a few zooms an animation.

if u read carefully i asked u to tell me whether or not i should continue it, because i dnt want to do heaps of work and finish and get flamed for it, and i said comment on camera movements because it was my first time doin it

Quote from ThatGuy

Nothing even moved.
How the hell can you call a few zooms an animation.

LOLZ i agree but the zooms were good

Quote from Edward0

if u read carefully i asked u to tell me whether or not i should continue it, because i dnt want to do heaps of work and finish and get flamed for it, and i said comment on camera movements because it was my first time doin it

does anyone read what i say....... because thats twice when people have posted bad comments and being to stupid to read what i have said

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LOLZ i agree but the zooms were good

i posted about the effect...