Jade

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Mar 10, 2013 7:40 AM #910294
My First Artwork ^v^"a

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http://www.fileize.com/view/3e40547f-041/

I don't know this is good artwork :I
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Mar 10, 2013 7:53 AM #910301
so cute! X3

i like jade too! x3
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Mar 10, 2013 7:58 AM #910305
So awesome(เจ้าน่าจะเติมเงาซักหน่อยนะ)
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Mar 10, 2013 8:00 AM #910306
Thanks!(พอเติมแล้วมันไม่สวยนิ..)
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Mar 10, 2013 8:05 AM #910309
The hair is pretty good, I like your art style for the body.

the eyes though, they need some whites around the irises. This also needs shading.

Keep at it. Try to draw Fullbody next time, as a challenge.

EDIT: Like Hewitt said as well, its a bit confusing.
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Mar 10, 2013 8:13 AM #910311
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The head turn angle is weird. Is she looking back or forwards O_o


She's looking back ಠ_ಠ
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Mar 10, 2013 8:17 AM #910313
Her left hand's angle is weird, which is why her head angle confuses most of us.
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Mar 10, 2013 8:22 AM #910314
It was my fault,I will correct in next artwork ;w;
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Mar 10, 2013 9:02 AM #910330
another fan eh the first time I hear its girl this time
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Mar 10, 2013 9:11 AM #910331
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That was my first guess. Partially because of how you tried to portray her left breast, but it's still confusing because there doesn't seem to be any other signifier like a sash or piece of clothing that would tell me she's looking back


I will excuse in next work,Thank you for the advice :3
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Mar 10, 2013 4:13 PM #910668
Could be better but not bad for a first.
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Mar 10, 2013 4:31 PM #910713
Your first ? o_O
Amazing c:
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Mar 16, 2013 11:50 AM #916606
this is nice, :)
the last time i drew camila, everyone got the wrong idea, and started their critic chat all over it :(

anyway i hppe she likes this one cause its nicely drawn,
well u asked if its good artwork?
well i say yes, :D
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Mar 17, 2013 2:19 AM #917299
Quote from Mark XD
this is nice, :)
the last time i drew camila, everyone got the wrong idea, and started their critic chat all over it :(

anyway i hppe she likes this one cause its nicely drawn,
well u asked if its good artwork?
well i say yes, :D


Th-Thank you!*Blushes*I will draw more..! I will practice more..! :D
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Mar 17, 2013 2:27 AM #917306
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Th-Thank you!*Blushes*I will draw more..! I will practice more..! :D


great , i'll stay tune to see some more :D