Well, since the art section has been active lately I felt obliged to whip up something to contribute to that.

I'm a bit rusty.

Nose and lips are kinda dissapointing, but I like your eye model.
Her breasts......kind looked a lot like a man.
The shoulder is a bit unproportional, too high upwards.
I damn love the BG, kinda suits up with the character type.
Overall, B+ or A-

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Nose and lips are kinda dissapointing, but I like your eye model.

They looks like an actual nose and lips, not the fake cartoony kind...
How in hell is that disappointing?

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Her breasts......kind looked a lot like a man.

I'm sorry, would a D- cup fit your requirement for feminine?


ANYWAY great work Leo, the only thing that fucks with me is the bottom pink outline you added at the bottom (it is just sorta there just to be there and it kills the rest of the lineart consistency)...

Now draw me a fucking Angry Bird...

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They looks like an actual nose and lips, not the fake cartoony kind...
How in hell is that disappointing?

The top part is a bit flat, which isn't normal, but I accept that.

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I'm sorry, would a D- cup fit your requirement for feminine?

No, but a realistic one will.

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ANYWAY great work Leo, the only thing that fucks with me is the bottom pink outline you added at the bottom (it is just sorta there just to be there and it kills the rest of the lineart consistency)...

Now draw me a fucking Angry Bird...

Fuck Angry Birds, draw me some machines that rips apart peoples.

@Leokill Don't worry about me, I'm just CnCing. It's my own point of view, and some people have different views (like Quik)
If you don't like it you could just ignore me.

Triss, what you probably think is the bottom lip is actually the tounge.

All I can say for cnc is that the lipstick isn't brownie, or the hair highlights.

Looks nice, the eyes seem a bit far apart and the nose could use a little work but overall it looks great. I love the coloring.

Uhmmm.
I think it looks perfect considering the cartoony line style.
I don't believe he was going for the most realistic thing you've ever seen.