I love it Anubis, though you need a small blur in the clouds though

It would have been nice if you didn't use the SAME patch of grass over and over.

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I love it Anubis, though you need a small blur in the clouds though

hmmm. ok.

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It would have been nice if you didn't use the SAME patch of grass over and over.

Haha, Im not tryna get super detailed with grass. I might add one or two variations but thats it XD

I'd say add some detail to the rock, looks really flat, like a carboard cut-out.

What Rosie said. Also, when you say desert, I imagine large flat expanses of sand, with no life, maybe except some cacti. This is more of a barrens or badlands. Although, the mountains are awesomely done.

that mountain on the right... the overhanging curved pointy bit looks a bit silly. i'd say make it a bit flatter like the other ones. right now it's just poo-shaped.

if you're putting this in an animation, some sandy wind effect might be a good touch if you can pull it off, maybe even just in the form of a light alpha sand-coloured gradient passing across the screen occasionally.


everything else i have to say has all been said already, but yeah:
- needs variation in the grass. don't be lazy and copy and paste it a bunch of times, just draw in a bit more new grass...
- the rock in the front, at least, really needs some more detail. i'd suggest adding more detail to the background rocks/mountains also
- a cactus or two might be a good touch
- a little bit of blur on the clouds could look good also.