Presenting one of my songs : )

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Armorstick

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Mar 18, 2013 1:53 PM #918689
Hey guys :)
Recently i made a new song,which is a mix of 8 bit and dubstep. I hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/espicx/espicx-world-of-retro
Tell me what you think! (Gotta make some new anims,too. : O )

Edit: https://soundcloud.com/espicx/espicx-chemical-funk Take a look :)
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Mar 18, 2013 4:10 PM #918843
I think it's a cool song, but the first 30 seconds kinda annoyed me, I'm not an music creator myself. (So don't take this to serious).
Maybe it would sound better if your song would have started at 0.30

Best part of the song for me was at 4.35!
I'm looking forward to hear some more of your work.
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Mar 18, 2013 4:14 PM #918851
Hm...Shouldnt this be in the Community Original's section?
Just asking.

And the song is really nice. It have a sad emotion to it...
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Mar 18, 2013 4:32 PM #918873
Everything held up just fine: timing was pitch perfect and you stuck with the same vibe throughout (which is harder than some people make it seem, at least for me). Though I do feel it could have benifited from an extra layer in the intro slowly increasing in pitch and tempo to make it a little less repetitive and to add a feeling of buildup. Also, at 3:25 the drop could have been heavier and more frantic, what with all that buildup and all.
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Mar 18, 2013 6:26 PM #918932
Moved to the correct section. Nice music too, decently catchy.
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Mar 18, 2013 7:05 PM #918960
Quote from Rochedan
I think it's a cool song, but the first 30 seconds kinda annoyed me, I'm not an music creator myself. (So don't take this to serious).
Maybe it would sound better if your song would have started at 0.30

Best part of the song for me was at 4.35!
I'm looking forward to hear some more of your work.


Thanks for the feedback :) . I think 4:35 is the best part of the song ,too. Thus it made me happy seeing what you wrote lol.

Quote from _Aiman_
Hm...Shouldnt this be in the Community Original's section?
Just asking.

And the song is really nice. It have a sad emotion to it...


Yeah, i didnt look well enough where to post the music stuff. : ( Thanks for feedback. I agree with you. ; )

Quote from bubbles
Everything held up just fine: timing was pitch perfect and you stuck with the same vibe throughout (which is harder than some people make it seem, at least for me). Though I do feel it could have benifited from an extra layer in the intro slowly increasing in pitch and tempo to make it a little less repetitive and to add a feeling of buildup. Also, at 3:25 the drop could have been heavier and more frantic, what with all that buildup and all.


Thanks for the feedback! And I totally agree with the drop. I just dont know how to make them yet. Need better plugins : /

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Moved to the correct section. Nice music too, decently catchy.


Thanks for feedback and moving it into correct section. Sorry for posting it in the wrong section.
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Mar 18, 2013 8:46 PM #919037
Love it. Although, I suggest that you could've used harder kicks and snares among the section past 1:36. You could've given the song a very powerful and forceful tone, which is what it sounds like you were going for.

Other than that, love the atmospheric feeling the song gives. it put a smile and my face, and I hope to see more stuff like this from you in the near future.

Also, Hi Armorstick. Don't see you here too much.
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Mar 19, 2013 7:42 PM #919852
Quote from Tsang
Love it. Although, I suggest that you could've used harder kicks and snares among the section past 1:36. You could've given the song a very powerful and forceful tone, which is what it sounds like you were going for.

Other than that, love the atmospheric feeling the song gives. it put a smile and my face, and I hope to see more stuff like this from you in the near future.

Also, Hi Armorstick. Don't see you here too much.


Thanks alot Tsang! I agree with you, I just dont have the knowledge yet how to boost my kicks and snares harder. And yeah i am busy with other stuff, thats why i am not much on Irc or here at the forums. But the time will come where I'll show new animations and of course new (and hopefully better) music : ) . (Maybe a Fullenght,too?)