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Mar 18, 2013 6:38 PM #918939
Did this in about 1 and a half hour
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Helped myslef with this picture from Guz a lot.
It may seem I copied it, but I wasn't trying to ;n;
http://jananims.deviantart.com/art/Me-lol-v-357798885

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Mar 18, 2013 6:52 PM #918952
Its a good drawing overall but I have to say the mouth is a bit too close to the chin. I like the eyes, though :) The hair showes some fluidity and texture but I still think that the face is slightly out of proportion. Gus's one looks better because it have shading around the top of the neck to make it look more 3-D like, the background is sloppy, but I guess with what time you had it was all you could do. As you can see, the top-right is unfinished. Overall, good job with the drawing and I hope to see more from you :)
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Mar 18, 2013 7:27 PM #918982
That neck is too long.