Practice fight

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Mar 18, 2013 7:41 PM #918998
http://www.fileize.com/view/057956ae-ff3/

Made this in 2 hours today.

CnC please
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Mar 18, 2013 7:48 PM #919005
The combos are basic and looked perfect, the smoothness is great and the reactions were good. The bad thing is that the last hit was confusing and I didn't quite get what happened until i saw it a couple more times. If you are going to do those sort of throws by using the leg, double frame or make more frames. Also there was a bit of wobblyness at the end when the green stickfigure crashed into the wall and fell. Improve on that and it should be very good!
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Mar 18, 2013 7:51 PM #919007
i agree good anim but the ending throw is quite a bit confusing
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Mar 18, 2013 7:54 PM #919010
Thanks guys. :)

Also the last throw was sorta fast I guess I probally shouldve used more frames.
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Mar 18, 2013 10:52 PM #919106
Pretty good, but the last movement was weird... I don't know :P But the animation was nice :)
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Mar 18, 2013 11:31 PM #919137
You need to work on the construction of the stick during moves.Some of his parts shorten or dont move at all.And also the ending pose looks bad, but good job though.

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Mar 18, 2013 11:44 PM #919150
@Nimbus: yeah that lat hit was off a bit.

@Alien: I see what you mean about the sloppiness of my stick construction I will try to work on it.
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Mar 19, 2013 12:11 AM #919178
That kick/throw thingy....oh lord....the rest was good though :)
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Mar 19, 2013 12:17 AM #919189
Lol that last move was off I know but thank you