Violent realism

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Mar 23, 2013 9:48 PM #923748
http://www.fileize.com/view/b244252c-f2e/
Finally made something longer than 5 seconds.
I called it violent realism because that's kinda what I was aiming for, I wanted it to look violent and realistic at the same time. That's why I didnt put in any over the top blood effects and what not.
I always seem to have a shortage of sound effects :(
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Mar 23, 2013 9:49 PM #923749
Well the face rip was a bit strange p:

I like the kicking at the end though
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Mar 24, 2013 12:08 AM #923839
What do you mean strange? Animated strangely or just strange that it happened?
The face rip was inspired by a video I was of some Chinese guy eating another guy on a train. Thats why I put it in there, but the point was to make is violent.
And to practice of course, that was the initial intent
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Mar 24, 2013 12:20 AM #923849
The run in the beginning was un natural....and the face rip scared me :'(

But I think you achieved what you were trying to get. Nice animation. Try making it flow more next time instead of it being stop and go.
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Mar 24, 2013 12:32 AM #923858
Yeah I didnt really like that run either, but I didnt wanna go back cus I looked at it after I had finished it.
And about the start at stop thing, that was very intentional, I wanted to make it look like hes building up rage to deliver the next kick. But that was an afterthought and I was too lazy to sync up all the layers and animate him breathing or something in between kicks.
I gotta start using movie clips for runs again, focusing on one cycle usually gives better results.
Thanks for the comment :)
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Mar 24, 2013 1:21 AM #923912
Oh I just thought because it was suppose to be realistic I was like WOAH. He ate his face. :O
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Mar 24, 2013 1:25 AM #923919
Ok cool, that makes me happy :D
But that is also realistic if you think about it.
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Mar 24, 2013 1:33 AM #923925
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But that is also realistic if you think about it.


yes, unfortunately
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Mar 24, 2013 5:11 PM #924614
Shameless bump, but I want more comments please :)
I want to improve, so far I know that I gotta work on my running and flow. Gimme something more, or just tell me if you liked it or not.
I love me some comments :3
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Mar 24, 2013 7:03 PM #924728
Deberías mejorar la sangre en el piso, has que se vea mas como que se derramo y quedo la sangre esparcida al rededor
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Mar 25, 2013 9:40 PM #926063
I used google translate, and yeah you're right the blood didn't look liquidy enough. I just used the circle tool for it :D I need to learn how to draw puddles that look realistic.