full body reaction practice

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Mar 24, 2013 2:46 PM #924408
http://www.fileize.com/files/dd647ea7/dad/react2.swf

complete!!
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Mar 24, 2013 3:09 PM #924450
Hmm Not Bad, What Tool You've Used ?
And Fix His and In The Last Frame When He Hit Him With The Elbow ! His Hand Seems Like If It's Broken !! It Shoulde Face Down Not Left Or Right !
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Mar 24, 2013 3:18 PM #924457
Thats so cool, I wish I could do that.
His waste seems to go up a bit too much though, and I think the other guy fell a bit stiff, but maybe thats just cus you didnt make him flatten out after falling. You got lazy at the end :D
Still really cool :)
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Mar 25, 2013 2:29 AM #925156
Ok I'll fix thos things
Thank you

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Hmm Not Bad, What Tool You've Used ?


well I use brush tool with tablet.

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lazy


yes I am :P
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Mar 25, 2013 2:32 AM #925158
Needs more frames on the build up, and try to exaggerate the moves more
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Mar 25, 2013 8:36 AM #925373
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try to exaggerate the moves more


more exaggeration??
like blur or shaking screen?
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Mar 25, 2013 10:59 AM #925451
thats cool but need more frame >.>
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Mar 25, 2013 4:48 PM #925807
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more exaggeration??
like blur or shaking screen?


No, over exaggerate...hmm

For example on the first kick: His leg just comes up and kicks him. There was no build up to that move as in maybe swinging his leg foward then it going back. or having him take a step back then kicking.
Same with the punch, it just.. happens. There's no way to tell what attack is next because it lacks build up before the attack.

With sticks you can somewhat get away with not showing build up with trails, sounds, shakes, etc. With fullbody though it's another story.

Example of build up would be like a baseball. You just don't take it out of the glove and toss it. There is the whole motion of swinging your leg up, planting it foward, and then throwing the ball. I could be wrong, I don't play baseball..

If you still don't understand I can make a somewhat quick picture or something.
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Mar 26, 2013 4:25 AM #926437
oh..
ok i'll try it.
thank you for your guide.
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Mar 26, 2013 4:35 AM #926441
the Simply Business is strong in this one...
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Mar 26, 2013 5:31 AM #926465
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the Simply Business is strong in this one...


well I love that..
maybe I'm inspired by that.
i didnt mean to make it similary though :P