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Lucario "The Blue Brawler"

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Mar 29, 2013 4:53 PM #929886
Name: Lucas Parker/Rio.

AKA: Lucario the Blue Brawler. (Nick: Luke) (Note: Nobody likes being called his real name, so stick with Lucario)

Gender: Male/Male.

Age:18 years old.

Abilities/Weakness:

Aura Manipulation (Click to Show)


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on the right wrist with a light orange color. The hand part is a round-like part that he can insert discs that allows him to use an individual's technique. He can make it appear and disappear as he wishes.
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Pros:
-After defeating/befriending an individual, the TM will glow lightly and a disc will pop out, containing his/her techniques/ special skills/ weapons... along with the knowledge necessary to use it.
Tip: Foe: Has a "monster/spirit/ghost" that grants you power, Lucario's aura can copy its features and creates a double that has the same effect (Without personality however). As for equpiments, the aura version of weapons/armor will materialized with a high initial cost, after that it stays like that for the rest of the match with the same properties as the original.
-Can be used along with Aura Spheres and reinforcement.
-Is invulnerable, so it can used as a shield.
Cons:
-Needs a hefty amount of aura to activate. Lasts 5 minutes. Takes 5 minutes to recharge (Without charging for aura). Can only use one per time.
-Lucario is still affected by the weakness if the ability used.
-If he uses his reinforcing/Aura Spheres, the energy drain will be faster.
-Though invulnerable, its size is its handicap.
+The RHDex: A red machine that beeps when Lucas touches a wRHG. It looks (unsurprisingly) like the Pokedex(1st Gen). When opened, it will show the list of wRHG encountered and fought (Also a list for monster). Location: In a pouch on Lucas's leg for easy scanning.(Usually used while engaging in a conversation)
Pros: There is a lens at the top right corner that is used to scan. By scanning a wRHG/monster, it will automatically analyze and shows the abilities/weakness of it. Can scan through clothing. Range: 5 meters.
Cons:Though it only takes 30 seconds to finish scanning, the target must be within the lens's sight. Should the target move away from the scanning range, the scan will cancel and no information will be gained.[/spoiler]

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body at any time. When one soul is in control, the other soul will NOT feel any feelings the body experiences, even after they switch. (Ex: Lucario is shocked by electricity. Lucas switched with Rio, which let Rio experience the pain. Then they switched again, Lucas is in control and doesn't feel the pain of being shocked, though DO feel numb because of it) Also applies to memory. But there is a common place where the minds share, like a lobby connecting the two where they can meet up.
Pros:
-Lucas: Used to his body, so his performance will increase. Also, can be more observant of his surroundings, allowing room for more instant strategies.
-Rio: When Rio uses the body, any subconcious limits are removed, along with continuous pumping of adrenaline, maximizing the body's capability.
Cons:
-Lucas: He isn't too fond of pain, so chances are that he'll switch with Rio when about to get hit. IF he gets a direct hit, he might be stunned/fainted/screaming in pain... and be unable to fight for a short time.
-Rio: Without regard for the body, he might injure himself too much without realizing it(His soul can endure a lot of hits, but not the body). Also, after using the body for too long (10 mins), the body will be unable to move.
PS: Lucas will be controlling the body most of the times. Sometimes he might let Rio enjoy his body but not often. Rio usually helps Lucas with the fight at certain times, however, not the entire match (Only 10 minutes).[/spoiler]

Limit Break:
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ht and has a purple outline, glowing purple eyes. His aura will now become white with purple outline.
Pros:
-His stats will be pushed to the limits and his aura supply will increase a lot faster.
-Despite having no consciousness, Lucario can still fight with strategies thanks to "body memory". (Though not as good as Lucas and usually based on instinct)
-Lucas and Rio can, however, help boosting its effectiveness thanks to their feelings (Lucas and Rio's desire to defeat the enemy will make Lucario's body' focus only at him/her/them.)
-In this form, he can use ANY TM at any time. (Combining use is possible, but very rare due to lack of consciousness)
Cons:
-Activates (sometimes) only when in great danger. Lucario can't normally use it since it's automatic. It also has some unknown negative effects, though not visible. Chances of activation: 1 out of 10. (You can use a randomizer if you want)
-After this form, Lucario's body will STILL be ENTIRELY HEALED, but his physical status will remain(He may be woundless, but he is still tired as fuck with all the fighting going on and lack of aura) and his aura supply will be severly depleted (enough to keep him conscious)
-Lucas and Rio will be unconscious, so the body will go buck wild, wasting aura unnecessarily and destroying everything within its line of sight.
-Lucas and Rio can reduce its effectiveness with their feelings (usually not to harm innocents)
-Time limit: 1-5 minutes.
-Chance of activation: 1/5 times.[/spoiler]

Key Items:
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Warrior upon initiation into his clan. Wearing an appearance of white diamonds, its spikes give him 6 more edges to fight with.
-Wallet. Self-explanatory. Black leather.
-A backpack for junks. Blue, with a strap for him wear over his shoulder.
-A diary. Brown leather cover with engravings on the front.
-A D.D.W: Different Dimensional Watch: Allows him to travel through dimensions. Has 2 charges. Recharge 1 use per day. Usually not used in battles. It's a black wristwatch on his left arm, showing nothing on the face as two rivets protruding from its sides.
-A pocketwatch, sliver cased with a mirror on the lid's underside and an analog clock beneath.
-An ice charm resembling a snow flake. It allows him to gather light to form swords.[/spoiler]

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nical Machine to use the abilities contained within them. Each has a name printed on its edge which shows the copied's name. Most have different colors, except for the outer edge, which is black.

A list of TMs he had acquired:
Fr0st the Archers' Master (Dragonfrost) (wRHG Boss Fight) (Dark Blue)
Aiman the Elementalist (_Ai_) (wRHG Boss Fight) (Black)
Arvine Callahan the Dragunov (Triss) (Chat Room) (White)
Chance Renard Downtown the Bloody Prince (Chamel) (Chat Room) (Dark Red)
Sam "Saf" Safford (Saf) (Chat Room) (Turquoise)
The Crystal Warrior (Codincx) (Clan Mate) (Purple)
Zackeroar the Raging Demi-God (XDHunterNest) (Clan Mate) (Red)
Grey the Silver Dragon (Gift) (Silver)
Kyle Arterus O'Brien the Nature's Gift (Gift) (Dark Green)
Nascha Migisi the Winged Warrior (Gift) (Yellow)
Atrema Sivlumtio the Crystal Maiden (Gift) (Blue)
Serena the Deathsinger (DelorMaximus) (Clan Mate) (Black)
DonJhea Kenner the Reckless (RaWrz-Cupcakes44) (Clan Mate) (Dark Red)
Stefan Norberg the Primed Light (devi) (Clan Mate) (Grey)
Drake Vans the Neon (Miracle) (Clan Mate) (Pink)
L.L. Bust the Mechanical Buccaneer (6Asmo6deus6) (Clan Mate) (Brown) [/spoiler]

Personality:
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enturer who is naive, courageous and loves jokes. Can be a bit hammy and flamboyant. In battle, he's a hot-blooded fighter with a flair for the dramatic.
-Lucas: A secretive man who is a smooth operator, having lots of tricks up his sleeves and a cool composure to boot. Though anger is one of his weaknesses, it appears in short bursts and rarely, if ever, interferes with his actions. Strategic abilities and manipulation skills are his weapons and he shall not stop before achieving what he wants. Cruelty isn't his favorite word, efficiency is. A cynical and sarcastic man, he dislikes jokes, especially badly made ones. Has an ego, but prefer not to show it. Strangely, he honors his promises, which he rarely, if ever, makes.
-Rio: A man with fine stoic quality. Loyal to the end, be it his master or his friends and betrayals are nigh impossible for him. Possessing a natural sense of justice, he will fight to protect others and his honor.[/spoiler]

Appearance:
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ow blue and his eyes red.(which is shown by the picture) His (slightly) agressive face with his hair in ruffles is a bit contradictory with Lucas' personality. He has a fairly above-average build, with a height of 1m85 and a weight of 100kg. After reaching StickPage, he went to Zaix's art shop and had his outfit "drawn" by them. He sports a custom-made goggles strapping itself over the side and the top his head. It's similiar to aviator goggles, with the exception of two pairs of leather straps that dangled on the side. He wears a fur collared vest and a black shirt underneath, slightly tattered at the neck. His dark blue pants are neatly tucked in black combat shoes and display two brown belts around his waist. There's a pouch on his right leg containing the RHDex for easy scanning. He wears long sleeve fingerless gloves under his usual brass knuckles. (But due to "circumstances", it broke and was replaced by a pair of Crystal Knuckles. Was painted the same color, though) Hanging on his neck is a large tooth hanging on his neck on a thick wire which is requested by Rio, as per his warrior tradition.
An image for reference:
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A headshot of Lucario wearing his brass knuckles:
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Story:
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se parents died in an accident, so he was living at a childhood friend's family. Because of lack of money, he didn't go to school. Instead, he went to a
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Mar 29, 2013 5:21 PM #929900
Better get the story and demo up fast. Btw this reminds me of lucario from Pokemon (the name, TMs and aura sphere) :)
It seems pretty good so far though.
Are theme songs the new "thing"? Lol
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Mar 29, 2013 10:47 PM #930127
A good character! But I am a little confused here; so Lucas and Rio are like two seperate ego?
I am looking forward to see your story and demo :3
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Mar 30, 2013 2:10 AM #930295
Nice wRHG. The theme song wouldn't come up because my computer keeps saying its a "POTENTIAL DANGER TO MY COMPUTER AND SOCIETY", it seriously told me in that exact form with those exact words, nowhere near joking.

Oh well still an awesome wRHG (I suggest looking up the theme song in youtube so other people can listen to it)

I suggest fighting Luther Wright when you believe your good enough, the two fighters would be quite a battle.
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Mar 30, 2013 2:21 AM #930309
Quote from DragonFrost
Better get the story and demo up fast.


wRHG unlocked, have fun writing :3
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Apr 10, 2013 9:58 PM #943159
Holy crap!!! Did you animate those?! I loved the first one! About to see the other two
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Apr 10, 2013 11:12 PM #943206
Quote from ChamelNeon
Holy crap!!! Did you animate those?! I loved the first one! About to see the other two


1. I'm pretty solid sure by Constructive Criticism, he meant his wRHG. Why jump into writing first thing if you have good animation skills?
2. Keep the subject on the topic of the wRHG, please.
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May 3, 2013 9:31 AM #963599
Um, guys? Anyone mind checking my wRHG? Constructive criticism needed. Thanks.
PS: Can anyone give a color for Lucas? Can't think of a good one. Also, how can I improve my Story/Demo?
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May 12, 2013 10:26 AM #971831
Lucas, Rio. Lucario. OH I GEDDIT NOW. I'm so slow. ._.
Anyways, nice wRHG. One of the few people who decided to do a schizo, so kudos to you. Unless you don't view him as a schizo. o_O
Um... you have a few grammar and punctuation errors here and there, you should proof-read your post.
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May 13, 2013 1:40 PM #972866
The wRHG itself is creative. I remember another wRHG with a sort of split personality, your battle with him would have been nice to read. :D
Also, add spaces between your paragraphs to avoid it becoming a block of text. I agree with Saf. Proof-read. It's a writer's best friend. :D
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May 13, 2013 1:54 PM #972883
I'm not a native English (Asia BABY!) so...Well, I'll do it anyway. But if you can point out the errors, I'll gladly comply.
PS: I'm thinking about recapping the entire Story+Demo into a Story. Then I'll make another Demo. What do you think?
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Jun 8, 2013 9:59 AM #1000656
BUMP! Check the Update for the changes I've made. Look out THEFORCE and ErrorBlender.
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Jun 8, 2013 11:38 AM #1000797
The update didn't really change my battle with you. It just needed minor adjustments and all.
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Jun 30, 2013 4:32 AM #1022919
Oh God...My...precious...An error....Rob me of....
Anyone...Does anyone know how to recover...
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Jun 30, 2013 11:03 AM #1023080
You. Gotta. Be. Kidding. Me. It's even shorter now.
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