Gem "The Jendoh" | StickPage Forums

Name
Gem

- Abilities:
- Inherited Knowledge of his predecessor:

That gives him battle experience and mastery of sword.

- Tactician:

When losing sword, he can plan ways to return it back, or to beat opponent in a tactical way.

- Agile:

Quick attacks with his sword.

Reflexes:

Fast reflexes gains him advantage during battles against quick opponents.

- The Homura Sword:

This is an ancient sword that was protected by Gem's grandfather's, it has a hollow part in its blade which can shoot light beams that explode on impact, and cant also used for pushing and flying, by pointing the hollow part in the blade to the ground. It's also pierced from the top and thick from the bottom.

-Light Convert

While in this form, he gains more attack power and speed as well as more speed overall and agility. This ability works when Gem is in a threat, Gem could gain this ability, but without his control. As it sometimes could be gained by the sword itself during battles. This ability lowers stamina when used, so it takes all of Gem's power. It's mostly used as a last attack.

- Weaknesses:
Weak HP because of having no armor. Easily angered and tricked so he could fall into traps. He can sometimes panic and don't know what to do.

- About/Story:
Gem was a school guy. He had a normal life. Until one day, when he came back from school, he went to his attic to see some stuff he had when he was a child. He went up stairs and saw some pictures of him with his grandfather. He didn't have any pictures for his father. He didn't actually see his father, because he died when Gem was a baby. So his grandfather used to do his dad's role and always loved Gem and saw him growing since he was young. But when Gem was 6, his grandfather died because of a heart attack. Gem always noticed his grandfather was talking about a will that Gem will own when his grandfather dies, but Gem didn't put this into consider. Gem noticed there was a picture he didn't see it before, so he grabbed it. Suddenly, the ground started to shake, so Gem stood up and was paniced, and he stepped away. The ground Gem was sitting on was actually a door, leading to a chamber. Gem was confused, he thought about entering the chamber in his house, but he was scared of what could happen, then he decided to enter the chamber,slowly. He noticed it was too dark in there, so he took a flashlight with him. Gem started walking down the stairs, slowly and pointing the flashlight around which appeared he was afraid. Til' he got down the stairs, he started walking in a straight line, while he was walking, he pointed the light at the walls and he saw some weird pictures of swords and weapons. Suddenly he saw a picture of his grandfather, wearing a weird custom that looked like ancient warriors. Then he saw a weird looking sword on a wooden desk with a message written on a piece of paper next to it. He grabbed the paper and started reading. It said: "Son, This is my chamber. I've defended this land for many years, and so did my fathers. It's now up to you to defend it from evil. I present to you, The Homura Sword. The most powerful sword ever built. It was created with one purpose, Defending earth. As a Jendoh, you must hold this with honor, and save the world from its threat...That's your destiny as it was mine. - Yoreshmmie Eno". Gem was very confused right now, what was his grandfather talking about? And what is that sword? But with all his thoughts, Gem believed in his grandfather and that he was right. So he grabbed the sword, but he got shocked hard once he grabbed it. So he fell on the floor in pain. But he insisted at doing that. Then he grabbed the sword again, but same as first try happened. He got shocked and fell again on the floor. He got up quickly and grabbed it again, and this time the electric shock was bigger, but Gem was still holding the sword, regardless from the pain. And suddenly, the shocks stopped, and Gem was still holding the sword and he succeeded to hold the sword. After that, Gem came everyday to the chamber to practice his sword skills. And in a short time he mastered his skills, and knew more information about the sword and the history of his grandfathers. And he became ready to fight.

- Personality:
A nice, friendly and helpful guy. He's also quite lazy sometimes, but always loves to help his friends. He's also very cool and hangs out with his friends at school. He also hangs out in different places. Like the Oldman's shop. Which is a shop that sells some cheap furniture and ancient staffs. He goes there to spend some time out of his house and tell him some stories. He's also can be tempered sometimes and not focusing.

- Appearance:
5'7 ft, 78 kg. A grey stick man. Quite thin and average height. Also he carries a bag which he keeps his sword. The bag is pierced from the bottom and thick from the top, due to the sword's shape.

- Demo:

Gem's Secret (Click to Show)

- Points: W/L = 1/0

Quote from Triss
Err.....THEFORCE, could you create more background story and demo?
This character has potential, only if you invoke it with a passion.

Meh..I think you guys are right. I did rush a little bit on most of the character layout. I need to totally improve. I did feel that my weaknesses are a bit OP I guess. But I just can't figure out any.

I'll probably add the sword to the abilities cause it's his main weapon.

And I just wanted it to be a stick figure because I like them. In my opinion they might be cooler than full-animated characters.

Only grey cause I didn't want him to be that special in anyway.

But thanks guys for the tips and opinions that you gave. And I'll think more about my character.