New Character Concept?

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Apr 13, 2013 6:38 PM #945475
Ok so if you know me, I participate in wRHG. I'm thinking of retiring my current character and replacing it for a new one. Or "ones". This is what they are supposed to look.

Tive Twins (Click to Show)


CnC would be nice. I'm still trying to touch up a few things, so it would be nice if you guys could help me. Thanks!

EDIT: Fixed/Added a few things
-Fixed eye position on Posi
-Made tie on Psoi undone / Tie color change
-Shaded Nega a bit more
-Added Freckles on Posi
-Added a bit of shading on hair
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Apr 13, 2013 6:43 PM #945478
thats great:)
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Apr 14, 2013 1:04 AM #945762
Nice, I like it. The postive/negative is a pretty cool concept, I'd continue brainstorming some ideas regarding character design or color schemes though, their clothing design is kind of bland and the blue and the red contrast fine, but seem a little overused in their design to me. To go a bit more indepth if you're wanting something unique, I'd look into making them have different key features, such as differently shaped eyes, undone tie, etc. Art wise, well done, the only problem i see is posi's left eye, it's position makes it look like he's not looking at you like negi is. I'd also maybe brainstorm more name ideas too, because negi sounds fine but posi is a bit awkward to say and doesn't really sound like a name to me.

Nice work, I'd love to see a fully done picture of these guys. :)
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Apr 14, 2013 1:15 AM #945775
Hmm, good ideas... I'll be sure to think of some new things. :) I was going for more of the cliche red and blue like you usually see on magnets, which is why the colors are over-used, but I see what you mean on it. And the eye... Now that I start to notice it, it really screw with my head >< But the differences is a good idea, thanks a lot Zaix.
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Apr 14, 2013 6:47 AM #945996
lol, reminds me of this: Image

Your artwork seems to be improving real fast.

Anyway, I'd say what Zaix said. That left arm on the positive guy is a bit messed up
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Apr 14, 2013 12:06 PM #946132
That's what someone else said, haha. Hmm... I see what you mean on the hand...
and thanks, I'm trying different tools and new techniques