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The Fusion [Trance]

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Apr 14, 2013 3:55 AM #945904
Nothing to say...just enjoy

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Apr 15, 2013 9:24 PM #947194
I liked the intro, the piano part. Mainly because I suck at melodies, or anything related to 'key notes' and what not. You introduced the first synth nicely, but stopped the piano too abruptly, in my opinion. The second the kicks start, the whole tune kinda' loses its punch, because you use the same kicks throughout the whole song.
There is 'somewhat' of a build up, leading to the drop, but you don't give your kicks enough 'punch'. It all sounds a little flat. The melody is good, even though Trance is not really my genre.
But I think if you'd boost the kick and clap a bit, (maybe give the clap a tad' of reverb) specially after the drop, the 'range' of your song would increase. If that makes sense.
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Apr 20, 2013 5:36 AM #950801
Yeah making a beat is not my specialty.I focus more on the melody and hey that's a good info.I might practice more on beat so I really need a good advice so yeahh thanks~
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