Did I make you fap ? xD

CNCs please!

several times

Haha, it looks pretty good. But watch out about that chin, seems a bit too sharp for a pretty little lady XD

I don't think you understand what anatomy is.

Try again, this time taking note of how bodies work instead of drawing blocks of shapes.

You MADE a girl?
Who's the mother?

If I wanted to fap, I'd just look to your avatar; I think I can see it.

But did she break a bone or something? Her bend is kinda unusual.

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I don't think you understand what anatomy is.

Try again, this time taking note of how bodies work instead of drawing blocks of shapes.

do you ever give useful criticism? all I ever see from you are generic "you suck at X" comments without anything constructive that might actually help someone improve.

Quote from Lobotomizer

I don't think you understand what anatomy is.

Try again, this time taking note of how bodies work instead of drawing blocks of shapes.

Just seems to me like you are trying to hard to be cool?
Quit putting other people down

Alright calm down, Lobo may be mean in her criticism, but if you take it AS criticism, it actually helps.

"Try again, this time taking note of how bodies work instead of drawing blocks of shapes." <--See?

She's just saying that Royce needs to make it seem smoother with better proportions, rather than just drawing blocks and coloring them for the picture. She does the exact same thing in her writing CnC, so don't take it too harsh, haha.

I implore the nay sayers to read this before saying anything
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?53186-The-Guide-to-Critiquing
Critique is there to help the user improve with knowing their flaws, and techniques used to fix them. If you are only providing flaws, or just outright generalizing that, it isn't helping the artist.

You got this totally wrong Apex, Royces body anatomy is not correct.

It's kind of a critique in a way.

So yeah, Royce, your body anatomy is incorrect which makes this girl look weird. Her back, hips and bottom don't match properly so try studying through that. This person has a pretty nice tutorials on that: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjMvttRETaY

Keep practising and you'll be good. I myself wanna start learning soon too, but I know I'll need to practise before I make it right.

Edit: By the time I posted this comment, two other comments were posted..

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You got this totally wrong Apex, Royces body anatomy is not correct.

It's kind of a critique in a way.

Learn! (Click to Show)

http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?53186-The-Guide-to-Critiquing , http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?53105-ART-STANDARDS-A-Scarecrow-Public-Service-Announcement

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I implore the nay sayers to read this before saying anything
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?53186-The-Guide-to-Critiquing
Critique is there to help the user improve with knowing their flaws, and techniques used to fix them. If you are only providing flaws, or just outright generalizing that, it isn't helping the artist.

What that guy said; Play nice fellas.

Well I didn't fap, but I got a slight boner.

Pretty good.

But yeah, I like the style alot, but the body could be a little more curvy.

Wtf is up with these: "I DROO UH GURL HAFF NEKKID" threads?
Anyway it seems overly simple. I'm not really knocking style simplicity in general but when using something like that adding a little more to it does it more justice. This kind of simplicity though had nothing going for it.

Far be it from me to say this but something tells me you just made this quickly just to say you drew a half naked girl. Just a feeling I got.

After reading some of the comments, I finally realized what I need to practice. Its my first time making a fullbody in different poses even in paper so I cant really know where to put their body parts correctly. But now, I know what to do in this pose and Ill practice more.

And yea, Quik, Its a style of attracting people if you really need their comments. Then, make serious ones afterwards if you already mastered what you want to know