The Nekonian intro (test)

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Apr 19, 2013 4:47 AM #950030
http://www.fileize.com/view/8e3fb784-23b/
Yeah.. Was thinking of more ideas of original non-stick characters, then out of my random mind, I made a white, glowing, light, holy cat with white fur, blue whiskers, eyes, and a symbol at the chest.
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He's the very first good holy character I made xD
Was testing a bit of a style I made.
CnC appreciated, good CnC ok? xD
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Apr 19, 2013 4:54 AM #950031
fuck ,that was awesome *jaws drop*
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Apr 19, 2013 5:00 AM #950038
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fuck ,that was awesome *jaws drop*


Uhh thanks ^_^
But I actually need some good CnC here that can point out any thing that can be improved that I don't see.
Still, thanks ^_^
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Apr 19, 2013 5:45 AM #950058
The whole thing was stiff and boring.

The cheesy white circle effect looked horrible considering I'm sure you didn't mask anything you just had the sword appear behind it.
As far as the character is concerned the design isn't that bad but it is, again, way too stiff and your spacing is too heavy.
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Apr 19, 2013 5:54 AM #950060
hahah cute :3
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Apr 19, 2013 6:03 AM #950062
Quote from Arch-Angel
The whole thing was stiff and boring.

The cheesy white circle effect looked horrible considering I'm sure you didn't mask anything you just had the sword appear behind it.
As far as the character is concerned the design isn't that bad but it is, again, way too stiff and your spacing is too heavy.


The white circle effect, you're right there, I don't know how to do those mask things yet..
What does thou mean by stiff and spacing is too heavy?
Thank for that CnC there
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Apr 19, 2013 6:03 AM #950063
Your too Addicted XD jk lol
but like Arch-Angel says the sword came from the back X).
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Apr 19, 2013 6:44 AM #950077
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The white circle effect, you're right there, I don't know how to do those mask things yet..
What does thou mean by stiff and spacing is too heavy?
Thank for that CnC there


Spacing, the amount of tie between movements. You have too much meaning your animation is not fluid.
During a run the transitions between steps have to be quick, so the legs are constantly moving. This is smooth.
When you make a movement and you ease everything out completely for about three frames in a row and then start a new movement is incorrect because there is too many frames due to the easing out and back in again so you have to pay attention to your movement. Especially which limbs are holding the weight and which ones are carrying the momentum.
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Apr 19, 2013 12:25 PM #950201
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Spacing, the amount of tie between movements. You have too much meaning your animation is not fluid.
During a run the transitions between steps have to be quick, so the legs are constantly moving. This is smooth.
When you make a movement and you ease everything out completely for about three frames in a row and then start a new movement is incorrect because there is too many frames due to the easing out and back in again so you have to pay attention to your movement. Especially which limbs are holding the weight and which ones are carrying the momentum.

Freaking late reply sorry
Thanks for the explanation, although I'm a bit confused, I'll try to do and understand what your CnC suggests