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Zephyr "The Weaver"

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Apr 23, 2013 1:28 AM #953175
Name: Zephyr
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Abilities

Passive
Balance-he has incredible balance; he can run normally on one thread. He can still be knocked off balance.

Strategist-he can think of intricate plans in minutes. His plans are so advanced that one unexpected move can throw it all off.

Intel gatherer- he believes enemy Intel is the key to any battle so he has perfected the art of espionage. He spends hours combing through files, video, whatever he can get his hands on about his opponents; sometimes resorting to stalking the opponent for a day or two to learn moves, mannerisms, attack patterns, strengths and weaknesses basically anything he can use in battle.

Battle experienced-he has been in countless battles big and small so he does not fear any opponent no matter how they look and has leaned not to under estimate people no matter what.

Active
Aura-His aura reservoir is absurdly larger than normal thus allowing him to fight with his threads and modes for a long time.

Aura eater-He is able to eat another’s aura therefore replenishing his own. This can only happen when there is skin contact.

Aura channeling-He can channel his aura into various parts of his body to increase their efficiency. There are three modes:
• Ranger: all his senses are boosted to nearly superhuman levels. This mode allows him to have greater control over his threads. His threads glow blue.
• Berserker: his strength, speed, reaction time is increased greatly. This mode allows him to make his threads sharper. His threads glow red.
• Vanguard: his skin becomes harder to cut, his cell regeneration and pain tolerance jumps. His threads become harder to cut. His threads glow green.

Aura threads-These come out of his gloves. They are as thin as the human hair, very strong that one can support 500 kilograms and cannot snap, burn, etc. but despite the toughness these can be easily cut by a pair of safety scissors and it glows a silver.

Spinner-These are his gloves, made of a strange material that acts as the catalyst to make threads.

Stinger-This is basically a sword hilt where he attaches threads and uses it as a whip or flail.

Weaknesses
Zephyr is mortal. He can make a lot of threads but it is not an unlimited supply. He does not wear armor. He can use two modes for ten minutes and all three for only five before he runs out of aura. In sensory mode he has the least attack power. In offensive mode he lacks defensive capabilities. In defensive mode he is slowest.there is a delay of five seconds before healing and even though he heals like wolverine if you hit a close part it will stop (if he is hit in the forearm a hit on the hand will stop healing but a hit on the other arm won't stop it

Appearance
Height: 5’10
Weight: 145 lbs.
He has short white hair, gray eyes and his facial features make him have a poker face all the time
He’s not really muscular, wears white shirts, jeans and an open black coat reaching to his knees, sometimes carries his laptop where he stores all his intel.
Personality
Outside battle: he is kind, care free and fun loving, really a trouble maker (in a good way) and loves to make friends, though he doesn’t really know how to show emotions because of his military upbringing.

Inside battle: he doesn't hesitate to do whatever he needs to do even if that means killing and doesn’t show any emotion, he’s stared death in the face multiple times.
Story

Zephyr’s story starts in another dimension, in that dimension there exists two civilizations. One called the A’va-Kaith and their enemies the Fal-Tesh. These two have been fighting each other for hundreds of years. Both under the order of their gods and equally adept to magic and technology. Then one day some Katih scientist-sages experimented on genetic material from the best warriors on the battlefield and the result was six bio-engineered super soldiers one of which was Zephyr, number three to be exact. From the day they were “born” they have been trained to fight and when each of them discovered their powers they became so strong that they were able to stand up against the Tesh’s most monstrous creations from a young age and they kept getting stronger day by day. Soon the Tesh hierarchy deemed them too dangerous to be left alone so they launched a capture or kill mission using five battalions in a sneak attack. In the chaos three of the five were wiped out by the six but they started to lose energy so a sorcerer started a travel spell, as the six were about to be evacuated a spell hit the sorcerer and the spell went out of control and exploded , engulfing the six. Zephyr woke up in a house of a farmer and told him that he was found passed out and alone. Zephyr worked there for two months as his thanks then wandered around until he partook in a fighting tournament and won. After the tournament one of the fighters approached him and told him of the wRHG. The day after he made a beeline for Stickpage city for three reasons: he wanted to continue training with the best of the best, his appetite for battle could only be fulfilled in that city and if he was right his teammates same appetite would lead them there and when they met they would return to their dimension and finish what they started.

Demo
That sunny morning Zephyr finally arrived Stickpage city and as he approached the wRHG building he felt nervous, even more so with every step. He knows it’s really stupid for him, a person who has killed so many, to feel nervous. He could hide it well but there’s no denying that feeling as he approached the door. He told himself to suck it up or he’ll never make it back. As he opened the doors he was a little surprised at what he saw because it looked kind of ordinary, a desk with a receptionist typing something on a computer and the rest of the room was a few tables and chairs here and there though the people in the chairs were stranger than the room itself on his right there was a man who looked like he came out of a western with a ten gallon hat and lasso not to mention a pistol and he was talking to a tanned dude, wearing a blue t-shirt and sporting a emo haircut. At the next table there was a blonde guy jotting something on a notebook with his left hand while eating some chocolate using his right. To Zephyr’s left there was a group of four taking, the one who seemed to be the leader who had his back to him had black spiky hair and was wearing all black. Opposite of him was a normal looking teen but he looked tense as if looking for trouble. On either side were brown haired girls though the one on the right was had longer and more auburn hair, she wore earrings, long sleeves and skinny jeans. While the one on the left had short hair with a clip on the side, wearing a t-shirt, shorts and there was a boy he couldn’t quite see that was beside the girl but he didn’t mind them much so he approached the receptionist.
“Hello I’d like to sign up.” He said though the woman at the desk didn’t even lift her head.
After half a minute she looked at him and handed him a registration form. He took it and went to the nearest table and pulled out his laptop with all the information he needed and some he didn’t. When he passed it the receptionist said

“Okay everything seems in order; we just need to evaluate your fighting ability”.
“Really, um ……. Okay”.
“Just make your way over there arena 6; it’s the third door to your left.” She said pointing to the hallway on her left. As he made his way there he put on his gloves and ran through his ever expanding library of strategies. Then he arrived in front of the metal door, as the door opened he stepped in and put his laptop beside the door and entered a steel walled room and sticking out from the ground were multiple stalagmites of varying heights and a door opened opposite of him and some kind of robot skeleton carrying a rifle came out.

“What the –“

He couldn’t finish because the robot started firing at him. So he got to work; he brought out his stinger and grabbed the tallest spire and jumped from stalagmite to stalagmite laying out his thread. When he was finished he swung the stinger at the robot as he stood on his threads expecting it to be slow and rigid thus easy to hit but it dodged like a gymnast and recovered fairly quickly. So he kept swinging the stinger and sent more threads with his left hand, then his strategy worked and grabbed a leg with three of the threads and using his Berserker mode he pulled it right out but the robot started shooting again, so he grabbed the supporting arm with the stinger and pulled it off, greatly reducing the robots accuracy so he used twenty threads to surround and crush it to pieces. Then five more came surrounding him, three in the front two in the back and these were in some armor. So he wasted no time and grabbed right most one with the stinger and flung it to the robot nearest it and these crashed on the wall, while keeping the momentum he swung the stinger at the right most one and sliced it into scrap metal. Then using his free hand he snaked his threads into the robot behind him removed its appendages and grabbed its torso and flung it at the last one standing and as it recovered from being hit the threads of the stinger coiled together and punctured the torso of the robot then quickly spread out, shredding the bot but by then the other two who went flying had recovered and started shooting so he changed mode into Vanguard and charged and even though some bullets hit him his healing kicked in and it was like he had never been shot then and wrapped them up then taking one of the guns shot them execution style.

“Good you’ll fit right in.” said the receptionist coming from the door he came through.” Here’s your I.D. and your key card” handing him two plastic cards.
“What’s the other one for?”
“It’s for your room. Will you be going there now?”
“No, ill practice some more.”
“Sure, and when you want to stop just say so we have mics built into the walls.”

He was having the time of his life and this was just practice; he couldn’t wait for an actual battle.

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vs. Gem (THEFORCE)

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Apr 23, 2013 8:41 AM #953406
Oh awesome gladiator! First time I've seen anyone use aura in that way; it'll be a blast thinking how volatile you could be with it~
His weaknesses seem to be balanced enough and the demo's pretty good, though it did confuse my view of that battle a couple of times
But overall he's pretty awesome, good luck in your future battles!

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Apr 23, 2013 2:03 PM #953616
You play Infamous? It's in your picture.
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Apr 23, 2013 2:25 PM #953647
Wow! I agree with :LITTLEGIRL: (Serenity) lol
Anyway, I really like the thought you put into this! It seems well thought out and managed, and I wish you luck in future battles :)
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Apr 26, 2013 7:04 AM #956143
*accepts cookie and eats it like there no tomorrow*
acutelatios- thanks, really i'm the first? and if you could see something that needs work or suggestions all are welcome

Serenity- i really want to play it but i can't find a store that sells it in my area

ChamelNeon-thanks
edit: made the demo clearer (I hope) and added limitation on healing
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Apr 26, 2013 7:10 AM #956145
Well not the first to use the term "Aura Thread" :3
I've used it a long time ago to refer the connection that a person has to others represented as a thread linking one's aura to the other, but how your gladiator uses aura; yuppers~
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Apr 26, 2013 7:11 AM #956146
okay thanks i actualy got inspired by an anime can you guess?
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Apr 26, 2013 7:15 AM #956148
Seems familiar~ Naruto?
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Apr 26, 2013 7:24 AM #956151
nope but i did have that as help when i was forming the idea the thing changed three times from organic matter( actual silk like threads) to steel threads and finally to that aura based
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Apr 26, 2013 7:29 AM #956154
Awesome! Seems like you placed lots of thought into this buddy!
anyways best not to get off-topic

again, good luck in your future challenges!
I hope to see you around and maybe even battle you someday~!
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Apr 26, 2013 7:36 AM #956161
Nice demo, lol. It got my attention when I saw 'auburn hair'. It describes my syrup;)

P.s. I have infamous 1 and 2. You can buy it in MOA. Though, a very far place.
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Apr 26, 2013 7:58 AM #956168
thanks i was wondering whether the descriptions were good and thanks ill try i MOA and i can't wait for Second Son
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Apr 26, 2013 8:02 AM #956170
I know right, too bad it will be on PS4 :(
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Apr 26, 2013 8:05 AM #956171
yeah i actually almost used the smoke thing while i was thinking of Zephyr
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Apr 26, 2013 9:42 AM #956239
Owh, ok.
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